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    Journal:
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    Mood: The Usual
      


    What is the distance between the tides and the moon?



    Is it one degree of separation? Should the sun decide to hide
    and the galaxy provide the spot, the tides will always be ruled
    by the moon and its force.




    And yet knowing this, nature will try to push against.






    Run its course to eventually
    Fall back into its rhythms.







    Pushing and pulling
    Inevitably surrendering.




    Taking its spot in perfect harmony.









    The gravitational pull in Perfect Unison






    On purpose






    With purpose










    Creating both calm and calamity










    Knowing this all along.


    ...Created 2017-09-13 13:18:55     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Nice journal. i love birdy.

    I think you did a fantastic job with poem and thank you, you've reminded me, i had forgotten to fav that.
    | Posted on 2017-08-09 00:28:10 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    the tectonic plates have been shifting and i had to see where i was going to land.

    thank you for your interest = kind soul, you are.
    | Posted on 2017-07-10 20:59:26 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Chelbel, I don't know what to say. I'm not the best at accepting compliments, but I appreciate what you said. Thank you
    | Posted on 2017-07-06 20:13:44 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your kind words. That was a very thoughtful message and I appreciated it.
    | Posted on 2017-05-27 08:34:39 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Chelebel. Had an internet startup shocker with a new company that knocked me off the grid for a few weeks. It was good actually, i've missed music.

    The thing with that poem and it being paired with the song.... well for me that do do do do do do part takes you right to that good place, that good place being so apparent, accessible, easily able to be drawn upon. Then, it's a question of why would you walk away from that?

    That's the apple i guess, what i'm asking her, why would you walk away from that. the bitter sweetness. that's what most of my poems are about. And like all of my poems it could use work, especially the middle section... but I'm not really so self conscious anymore that i have to wait till i've got something perfect. putting it down is part of the process. Anyway, I thank you for your workshop minded critique, your offering of awesomeness (which should be the spirit of this place) which i will read again and again no doubt.
    | Posted on 2017-04-05 03:13:49 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey yo. I thank you for your thoughts. I thought you were a champion for offering them.

    I have some days off so i'll respond in the next day or too. ?Just wanted to say i really appreciated it.
    | Posted on 2017-03-23 04:59:41 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -



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