--Elite Writer Alias: Chelebel Name: Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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Hey Chelebel. Had an internet startup shocker with a new company that knocked me off the grid for a few weeks. It was good actually, i've missed music.
The thing with that poem and it being paired with the song.... well for me that do do do do do do part takes you right to that good place, that good place being so apparent, accessible, easily able to be drawn upon. Then, it's a question of why would you walk away from that?
That's the apple i guess, what i'm asking her, why would you walk away from that. the bitter sweetness. that's what most of my poems are about. And like all of my poems it could use work, especially the middle section... but I'm not really so self conscious anymore that i have to wait till i've got something perfect. putting it down is part of the process. Anyway, I thank you for your workshop minded critique, your offering of awesomeness (which should be the spirit of this place) which i will read again and again no doubt.
I've already used my list as a series of prompts on a writing page I host on FB. You may add as many as you like to your page and I shall respond as often as time allows.
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