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    Journal:
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Pieces of me inside pieces of you
    Pieces of you inside pieces of me
    Never capable of letting go
    Only able to cope


    Dreams persist without explanations.




    subconscious thoughts keep nagging.





    It’s much like the ashes that keep falling in San Diego.





    Or like the race horses running from the smoke.






    Hillsides scorched and then left alone






    Nature and it’s fiery nights.







    ...Created 2017-12-09 22:44:08     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Scars You Beautiful
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    That must be the light light of your life. Congratulations. I am very happy for you. :)

    Alright mamma!
    | Posted on 2017-11-05 10:21:34 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the hearty comments on the poem. I do like your journal.

    I kind of think of the presentation of my work as problematic. Like trying to draw a line around space to say this is where it ends. or perhaps when you look at space and parts of solar systems look clouded, that's where you never wrote to, or couldn't write to, then, maybe they are perfected clouded. In any case I'm not sure how I would ever present it. I'm pretty sure I never will. In time the things that you cared so much to write about become the things you cared too much to write about and then the things you can no longer care about. I am not sure how that happens. It's not an apple you can break open.

    Are you pregnant? Did i ask you that already?
    If so I am excited for you :)
    | Posted on 2017-11-04 07:24:30 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Nice journal. i love birdy.

    I think you did a fantastic job with poem and thank you, you've reminded me, i had forgotten to fav that.
    | Posted on 2017-08-09 00:28:10 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    the tectonic plates have been shifting and i had to see where i was going to land.

    thank you for your interest = kind soul, you are.
    | Posted on 2017-07-10 20:59:26 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Chelbel, I don't know what to say. I'm not the best at accepting compliments, but I appreciate what you said. Thank you
    | Posted on 2017-07-06 20:13:44 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your kind words. That was a very thoughtful message and I appreciated it.
    | Posted on 2017-05-27 08:34:39 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -



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