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    Journal:
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Pieces of me inside pieces of you
    Pieces of you inside pieces of me
    Never capable of letting go
    Only able to cope


    Dreams persist without explanations.




    subconscious thoughts keep nagging.





    It’s much like the ashes that keep falling in San Diego.





    Or like the race horses running from the smoke.






    Hillsides scorched and then left alone






    Nature and it’s fiery nights.







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    Hey Chelebel. Had an internet startup shocker with a new company that knocked me off the grid for a few weeks. It was good actually, i've missed music.

    The thing with that poem and it being paired with the song.... well for me that do do do do do do part takes you right to that good place, that good place being so apparent, accessible, easily able to be drawn upon. Then, it's a question of why would you walk away from that?

    That's the apple i guess, what i'm asking her, why would you walk away from that. the bitter sweetness. that's what most of my poems are about. And like all of my poems it could use work, especially the middle section... but I'm not really so self conscious anymore that i have to wait till i've got something perfect. putting it down is part of the process. Anyway, I thank you for your workshop minded critique, your offering of awesomeness (which should be the spirit of this place) which i will read again and again no doubt.
    | Posted on 2017-04-05 03:13:49 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey yo. I thank you for your thoughts. I thought you were a champion for offering them.

    I have some days off so i'll respond in the next day or too. ?Just wanted to say i really appreciated it.
    | Posted on 2017-03-23 04:59:41 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I've already used my list as a series of prompts on a writing page I host on FB. You may add as many as you like to your page and I shall respond as often as time allows.
    | Posted on 2017-03-06 06:41:35 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You owe me ten minutes of my life i'll never get back.

    just kidding/you're welcome.
    | Posted on 2017-02-09 11:50:22 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yup, it works with Alessia Cara number...
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