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    Journal:
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    It was the sea grass that lured
    the sea oaks that sprawled
    The moon that was full
    My heart as well




    It was the sand between my toes
    The joy I held below the surface of woes
    It was the beating of a drums heart beat
    The flapping of the winds sung sing
    The willow of the beautifull day it brings


    It was all you could image and more
    Beyond the clouds and even the shores
    It was as far fetched as the nebula that flowed
    And all the hearts that sang
    They glow




    It was and will continue to be







    Known.


    ...Created 2018-12-05 21:26:26     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Thanks for the hearty comments on the poem. I do like your journal.

    I kind of think of the presentation of my work as problematic. Like trying to draw a line around space to say this is where it ends. or perhaps when you look at space and parts of solar systems look clouded, that's where you never wrote to, or couldn't write to, then, maybe they are perfected clouded. In any case I'm not sure how I would ever present it. I'm pretty sure I never will. In time the things that you cared so much to write about become the things you cared too much to write about and then the things you can no longer care about. I am not sure how that happens. It's not an apple you can break open.

    Are you pregnant? Did i ask you that already?
    If so I am excited for you :)
    | Posted on 2017-11-04 07:24:30 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Nice journal. i love birdy.

    I think you did a fantastic job with poem and thank you, you've reminded me, i had forgotten to fav that.
    | Posted on 2017-08-09 00:28:10 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    the tectonic plates have been shifting and i had to see where i was going to land.

    thank you for your interest = kind soul, you are.
    | Posted on 2017-07-10 20:59:26 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Chelbel, I don't know what to say. I'm not the best at accepting compliments, but I appreciate what you said. Thank you
    | Posted on 2017-07-06 20:13:44 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your kind words. That was a very thoughtful message and I appreciated it.
    | Posted on 2017-05-27 08:34:39 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Chelebel. Had an internet startup shocker with a new company that knocked me off the grid for a few weeks. It was good actually, i've missed music.

    The thing with that poem and it being paired with the song.... well for me that do do do do do do part takes you right to that good place, that good place being so apparent, accessible, easily able to be drawn upon. Then, it's a question of why would you walk away from that?

    That's the apple i guess, what i'm asking her, why would you walk away from that. the bitter sweetness. that's what most of my poems are about. And like all of my poems it could use work, especially the middle section... but I'm not really so self conscious anymore that i have to wait till i've got something perfect. putting it down is part of the process. Anyway, I thank you for your workshop minded critique, your offering of awesomeness (which should be the spirit of this place) which i will read again and again no doubt.
    | Posted on 2017-04-05 03:13:49 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -



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