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    Name: Caleb Bronson
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    Journal: Child In Time
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Sweet Child In Time,
    You'll see the line,
    The line that's drawn between,
    Good and Bad.

    See the blind man,
    Shooting at the world,
    Bullets flying,
    Taking toll.

    If you've been bad,
    Lord I bet you have,
    And you've not been hit,
    By a flying lead.

    You'd better close your eyes,
    And bow your head.

    And wait for the richochet.



    This is the lyrics to Deep Purple's Child in Time my undisputed favourite song.


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    Okay, who has the mental problems here? That's right, YOU.

    First off, No nerve was hit with me. None. I have over the years built up a nice wall which prevents me from caring what others think of me.

    Second off, What kind of Dick brags about getting into others heads? What is wrong with you? I can promise you this your little comments to him did not bother him. It was only when I involved myself did he even think of dignifying your incredibly juvinile remarks with a response. Thinking you were owed some form of explaination to my harsh critques. He, unlike you, has some measured standard of politeness.

    Third off, Why do you bother getting into infantile arguments online? Is your home life THAT unsatisfying? You remind me of a small spoiled child, upset that he has not gotten his way. Very arrogant. Yet, completly juvenile. Your arrogance is unwarrented because you are an okay writer and your people skills, to put it bluntly, suck.

    All in All, you are a remarkably childish and immature person. Frankly, It's your kind that makes this world a negative place. Thankfully, It's your kind that live miserable and lonely lives. Karma's great, isn't she?

    Now I have more important things to worry over so leave me and my Fiancee alone.

    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-12-11 12:23:50 | by dismal_s child - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I would like to visit there someday with my father. it sounds like fun! do people wear green all the time?
    | Posted on 2008-12-07 18:19:54 | by Sodais - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    "He shot ...himself," better that he shot a queen of the tyrant nation of the U.K. A nation that has never f....ing apologized for all its crimes especially against Ireland. poe
    | Posted on 2008-12-07 16:55:36 | by poetotoe - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    try being original for a change(your journal entry), I just think it is lazy to use other's words in leiu of your own. no matter what others think, it will always be yours and you should always be proud that it is. The critique didn't rattle me wrong or any thing, I just thought I should return the "favor."
    sincerely your's SAGITTARIUS REVEALED
    | Posted on 2008-12-05 04:58:01 | by SAGITTREVEALED - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    That's fantastic! but i'm not from irland but my father went there once.

    My father's from Yemen and my mother is from India and i was born in California.
    | Posted on 2008-12-05 01:51:13 | by Sodais - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thanx for the comments(not)! I write for my self and my ONE AND ONLY LOVE.No thesaurus involved! just words that come to mind to convey my meaning.
    If you don't like, then don't read,K?
    BTW~~ has death ever touched you?
    would you like me to ask him to?
    | Posted on 2008-12-04 08:46:29 | by SAGITTREVEALED - [ Reply to This ] -



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