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    Alias: ChildInTime
    Name: Caleb Bronson
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    Journal: Child In Time
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Sweet Child In Time,
    You'll see the line,
    The line that's drawn between,
    Good and Bad.

    See the blind man,
    Shooting at the world,
    Bullets flying,
    Taking toll.

    If you've been bad,
    Lord I bet you have,
    And you've not been hit,
    By a flying lead.

    You'd better close your eyes,
    And bow your head.

    And wait for the richochet.



    This is the lyrics to Deep Purple's Child in Time my undisputed favourite song.


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    Hey, your form irland! how does that feel?

    | Posted on 2008-12-04 02:18:21 | by Sodais - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate it and I really need a comment like it:) i hope you'll give more pointers next time and help me out in my writing. Once again thanks.
    | Posted on 2008-12-03 05:28:34 | by PassingBy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comments on 'Sound of His Wings'. Thanks for the pointers. Hopefully, will take note of it in the future. :)
    | Posted on 2008-12-03 02:05:58 | by whchong - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    not sure if i thanked you for your comment... so, yeah, thanks for your time reading and all that. myself, i focus more on how it's read out loud, and the message/s in it rather than on form. form when it suits, yes, but i'm finicky about a lot of things. so, yep. cheers, though.
    | Posted on 2008-12-02 10:52:57 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment on "quenching" and finals are over on wed. so i might take a look at rumor 12 thursday morning. thanks again sweets.

    ash.
    | Posted on 2008-11-30 22:17:01 | by SincerWritinAsh - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you much for your comments Caleb on "Bear and Doll" and for making it a fave. I haven't written a lot of prose, and the concept of the two old abandoned toys was supposed to be a poem originally--but I couldn't seem to wrap poetry around the idea at the time. I will be back to visit your page and look forward to reading some of your work.
    Silver
    | Posted on 2008-11-30 00:51:24 | by Silverdog - [ Reply to This ] -



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