Well thanks for your comment on "White Clouds", and for your question, I'm a Wiccanly influenced pagan, lol. So yeah, you were pretty much dead on. I go by Unitarian Universalist too, because I go to church. Your words were really nice and well appreciated. It was a pretty sad poem because I wrote for a good friend of mine whose relative had passed away. I wanted to help her not feel so lost. Thanks for stopping buy, I appreciate it.
Something I have yet to figure out is why when i sometimes read an older poem of somoeone, the option to leave a comment is not there? Is this a setting? I hope it's not the case with my own poems.
Anyway, i wanted to leave a comment for "A Warrior's Love" but it wouldln't let me so i'll ask my question here. Is this poem based on a existing folk or fantasy story? I liked it. Perhaps that in part has to do with my liking of these sort of themes in general. So anyone who can write a good poem of this type i enjoy reading.
I didn't mean my words in a bad way,I just don't expect any comments because I feel that if people like my scrips or if they don't then they can keep it to themselves. I am glad and thankful for your words,I really am,so I hope you didn't take it the wrong way.
Thanks for the comment on "Perfection is a dirty word." I can see your point on the strive for perfection very much. People like to erase eachothers flaws on concentrate on their own. Which in turn tends to make them blow their own flaws out of proportion and see others as superior to themself, which leads to celebrity worship and all that. Thank you for the time and thought that you put into your comment. Briannan
Thank you for your comments... However, I do have to comment on "I'm not they type". You'r oly 19. I use to say I'd never get married never have kids and lived that life fully until I was 26!! Then all of a sudden I'm married with a kid. Wouldn't change it for the world. All I can say is don't put it out of your mind yet. Your so young. :) I've read a few of your poems, going to read some more, but like what I've read so far. Thanks for the comment. And I agree. I've had a problem with that line since i wrote it. LOL...