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Journal: Justice
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Title: Justice (from Vandread: The Second Stage)
By: Kudou Aki

Fight for your justice! Show your courage.
Right! Grasp truth in these hands.
Fight for your justice! I want you as you fight through,
with your head held up high.

Rather than polishing diamonds, give me a glistening future.

Something new that I don't want to yield. Seeking it is justice!

Fight for your justice! Be serious about it.
Right! Face reality head on.
Fight for your justice! I love how you never give up,
even if the current is against you.

You need to embrace sweet dreams, from them real ones will fly.

Stand up! Many of us together will write what hasn't been written.

You and I help to understand that believing in feelings is justice!

Fight for your justice! Show your courage.
Right! Grasp truth in these hands.
Fight for your justice! I want you as you fight through,
with your head held up high.

Fight for your justice! Be serious about it.
Right! Face reality head on.
Fight for your justice! I love how you never give up,
even if the current is against you.

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I thank you for that wonderful critique on my piece "My Frustration" and I'm ever so glad that you now have it as one of your favorites! I'm honored. I'll take out that comma for you, it took me a couple rereads of the line but finally decided that was best. But I must sadly say that I have the greatest trouble writing stories, or poems for that matter, with happy endings. It'll probably take me forever if I try and I'm afraid it might come out really cheesy. But maybe I can use your suggestion as a summer challenge: to finally write a happy ending.

I thank you again.

-Alina

| Posted on 2008-05-25 23:41:30 | by Jakirina - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the review. It was originally supposed to be for a drama production but it was canceled that year. It was an actual conversation that my cousin and I had had one day and then we wrote it down. My cousin is Avocado and I am Pizza... they are our nicknames that my brother, her and I came up with.

| Posted on 2008-04-27 11:52:51 | by Fallyn Angel - [ Reply to This ] -

I agree that the "pun" is sensible, I guess I was just interpreting it wrongly. And do not feel an obligation to return a comment, I truly don't mind at this point whether I've a million or none. If you want to however, be my guest!

| Posted on 2008-04-15 22:50:51 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -

ur critique was much appreciated,i enjoyed hearing that it caused a reflection of thoughts and examaning ur self-thanx much,if u eva want a critique holla @ me....crazy...

| Posted on 2008-04-11 18:15:06 | by crazyphreshone - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for the comment Joshua. Glad you enjoyed it. Never been much into trying to maintain the "conventionality" of writing though, but I appreciate the suggestions and can sort of see the point you made...but then again...sometimes people think too deep about things in order to try and maintain some sort of normality. Sounds like you have a decent English language teacher though.

Thanks again.
Dave

| Posted on 2008-04-10 23:33:25 | by hyproglo - [ Reply to This ] -

Aye, a guy can, and very well, apparently ;)

like i said, it was really good. i enjoyed it :]

Peace

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