--Elite Writer Alias: Clayman Name: Shawn Van Wyk ASL: 25 w m SA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 0 Life Story: Im just a guy with a unique perception on life i wish to share with others. I dont know anything about metres or poetry rules as im more of a freestyle writer so see my work as such. [ Ignore User ]
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thanks for the missings.
i leave ethiopia in one week. im devastated by the thought so i just dont think about it lol.
im completely in love with a boy here and have no idea how any of that is going to work once i leave here but i know god has a plan and eventually he will make that plan happen
hope everything is well with you
stay awesome.
Thanks for the comment... I know exactly what you mean with the missing punchline bit, I get the same feeling reading it.. although I feel like it is all like that, not just the end. I remember the first time I went through writing/reading it, and how I felt so satisfied, and proud... Now I kind of just cringe at the idiocy that must've plagued me.
Anyways, I'll edit the poem soon... I was looking for one or two more comments just to get the general feeling of a "consensus" on that piece.. but I'm also getting a little impatient at present..