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    Name: Shawn Van Wyk
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    i should considering it's boring down here!
    | Posted on 2009-11-20 07:25:25 | by gothgirl101 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the missings.
    i leave ethiopia in one week. im devastated by the thought so i just dont think about it lol.
    im completely in love with a boy here and have no idea how any of that is going to work once i leave here but i know god has a plan and eventually he will make that plan happen
    hope everything is well with you
    stay awesome.
    | Posted on 2009-11-20 01:43:41 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Awwww....your sweet....but you are not amusing lol jk!! love you!!
    | Posted on 2009-11-19 07:28:56 | by gothgirl101 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey..

    Thanks for the comment... I know exactly what you mean with the missing punchline bit, I get the same feeling reading it.. although I feel like it is all like that, not just the end. I remember the first time I went through writing/reading it, and how I felt so satisfied, and proud... Now I kind of just cringe at the idiocy that must've plagued me.

    Anyways, I'll edit the poem soon... I was looking for one or two more comments just to get the general feeling of a "consensus" on that piece.. but I'm also getting a little impatient at present..

    Thanks!
    Marc
    | Posted on 2009-11-18 17:32:16 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    what's up!
    | Posted on 2009-11-18 07:30:00 | by gothgirl101 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much for your recent comments, and I'm sorry I was distracted and didn't thank you sooner.
    | Posted on 2009-11-18 01:32:01 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -



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