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Mood: The Usual
...Created 2013-09-18 06:23:47 [ View Past Journals ]
Woke up this morning with an ache in my head,
open the cupboard for my favorite cup, found the chipped one instead.
Put on the television, searching for my favorite shows,
the numbers change but all I see is news.
The writing is on the walls with nobody there to read it,
I'm already on my way out.
Outside it's too warm without a sun to be seen,
only a canopy of clouds and I'm wondering at when all of this began.
At night the sting subsides long enough to enforce the notion that the next day might contain less searching.
open the cupboard for my favorite cup, found the chipped one instead.
Put on the television, searching for my favorite shows,
the numbers change but all I see is news.
The writing is on the walls with nobody there to read it,
I'm already on my way out.
Outside it's too warm without a sun to be seen,
only a canopy of clouds and I'm wondering at when all of this began.
At night the sting subsides long enough to enforce the notion that the next day might contain less searching.
...Created 2013-09-18 06:23:47 [ View Past Journals ]
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| | Posted on 2013-10-30 23:15:25 | by nikita2u - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Please let me know when you are online next, so I may give you a critique. :)
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| | Posted on 2013-04-26 19:26:16 | by siroez - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Thanks for comment on First Stars! You said "all worlds" might go as "small worlds" and it would, I guess. I was thinking about the great telescope looking up in search of the whole night sky, so I put "all worlds". Some people didn't understand the first stanza at all, since you need to come from the title and imagine being up on a tall hill by the telescope, and I left too much to the imagination. Tut.
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| | Posted on 2013-02-07 19:43:59 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| hi there.
thanks for stopping by and leaving words on mine. i am never sure about the convos i sometimes post (if they have any merit at all). so i appreciate what ya had to say. yup i do. |
| | Posted on 2013-02-05 07:29:40 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| "Feeling something building" is the best feeling ever. I can't wait to see the resulting work from the building up! I am sure it will be a pleasure, as usual :-)
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| | Posted on 2012-11-20 01:36:08 | by CrypticBard - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| There was no comment box on "the quiet dream" so I write my comment here and to let you know what a pleasure it was to read.
Thanks for sharing. And I will write more next time on your comment box as the non existence of the comment box on that particular poem has thrown me off my train of thought. Peace. |
| | Posted on 2012-10-29 02:29:16 | by CrypticBard - [ Reply to This ] - |
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