--Elite Writer Alias: Clayman Name: Shawn Van Wyk ASL: 28 - getting late Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2721 Life Story: Im just a guy, speaking my mind [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 51 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 16 Signup Date: 4213 D 11.54 Years 1.15 Decades 140.43 Months 601.86 Weeks 4.213000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: In the darkest situation there is always the smallest salvation.
Thanks for comment on First Stars! You said "all worlds" might go as "small worlds" and it would, I guess. I was thinking about the great telescope looking up in search of the whole night sky, so I put "all worlds". Some people didn't understand the first stanza at all, since you need to come from the title and imagine being up on a tall hill by the telescope, and I left too much to the imagination. Tut.
"Feeling something building" is the best feeling ever. I can't wait to see the resulting work from the building up! I am sure it will be a pleasure, as usual :-)
There was no comment box on "the quiet dream" so I write my comment here and to let you know what a pleasure it was to read.
Thanks for sharing. And I will write more next time on your comment box as the non existence of the comment box on that particular poem has thrown me off my train of thought.
Peace.