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    Journal: A Question
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    Mood: Confused
      
    What can't you write about? I mean, you don't have to be specific....or you could put the things you can't write about in with a bunch of other things that aren't relevant to you (but you wouldn't write about if they were), so I won't know which is the real deal. I'm just curious. I mean somethings are difficult to write about openly- sex/sexuality, religion, drugs and other addictions, anything illegal, your dark secrets,
    dark desires, personal sins, embarrassing stuff, stuff that would cause your family to ostracize you, stuff that involved other people IF they wouldn't want it made public, mental illness, suicide, and as I mentioned crimes or illegal things earlier, I should mention that also there would be moral crimes. There's more I can think of, but they start getting more specific, I think, so I'll leave those out for now. What about you?


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    why do you post here wanting feedback when you never reply to anyone who actually bothers to leave you their thoughts? a simple thanks will get you a long way, both here and in real life, i've noticed... but hey.
    | Posted on 2009-06-27 17:38:40 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'd never write a poem about wankers that have middle names such as 'reuben' or the likes.

    I could, in all seriousness, write about ANYTHING and I doubt the world would actually care enough to resent me for it.

    I once wrote a poem for a girl that was full of lampoonery. She thought it was nice. I was asked to write a poem for an awards ceremony at school; I expounded on the absurdity of the event and the institution and everybody clapped except for my english teacher and my mother.

    Actually, here's something: I could never write something that would actually affect other people's lives in any way, shape or form.
    | Posted on 2009-06-08 00:56:35 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I wouldn't write about my dark secrets or petty vanities that would make seem like a vain wan ker instead of an upstanding type.

    In life you censor yourself as best you can.
    I wouldn't write honestly about 80% of that.

    I wouldn't write that O is any kind of decent human bean.

    that's the 3 biggies that spring to mind.
    | Posted on 2009-04-08 23:44:33 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    you'll do :)
    | Posted on 2009-04-08 21:42:40 | by HuyBenAmon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey I just had a question, what website do you go on, I was reading your short story, Paper Poke Surprise, and you mentioned a Writing site?
    | Posted on 2008-10-18 19:38:26 | by Drain_my_Blood - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I know this isn't mighty useful, but it will shorten your story by a few words.

    Glabella - The space on your forehead between your eyebrows.

    I also think if you cut a few unneeded adjectives, you could shorten it some more that way - not enough of course but still somewhat. You might also want to consider changing the angle of the story (perhaps take it from the spider's point of view? which may help avoid extra descriptions, and give you circumstances for other bizarre things).
    | Posted on 2008-08-27 04:48:01 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -



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