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    Currently Stalking: SexyBeazt

    Journal:
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Meus olhos ardem
    na claridade morta
    de crepúsculo.
    Por qué ainda estou
    tão sózinha?
    Um dia
    lindo
    se afogou nos brazos
    dessa noite cruel.


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    Thanks! I'm glad you liked "Embracing the Shattered Vase". I often employ odd line breaks to intentionally make things choppy. A poem can be smooth and be very effective. But, in my opinion, a choppy poem can be just as effective, if not more.

    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

    Your friend,
    ~Asiaticfox
    | Posted on 2008-10-09 13:51:28 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey, thanks so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 22:00:56 | by themoviesong - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    So wait, are you admitting to a romance going on between us? :P
    | Posted on 2008-08-04 13:22:42 | by SexyBeazt - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Damn straight. is the only thing i can think of to say.
    and it doesnt seem right.
    | Posted on 2008-08-04 02:58:25 | by SexyBeazt - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I believe you wrote this too,

    Valentine
    By: Coeur Lazulis

    Turrets of green and gold,
    Caramels to dazzle, thence no finer
    Than simple beauties stretched threefold;
    Poetic harmonies strung to a minor.

    Pendulum dreams that swing to and fro,
    Ringing chimes that sound of enamored things
    Only God alone would know,
    (Least forgotten from our imaginings.)

    Vermillion lips that, however graced,
    Cannot hide that deviant smile,
    Jasmine scents so mildly laced
    To a presence made worthwhile.

    | Posted on 2008-08-04 02:53:01 | by SexyBeazt - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much for your comment and advice on 'Thank You'. I definantly will work on it som more and keep your suggestions in mind. I'll let you know when I finish it.

    I must say the picture of the cat on your page is very cute.

    *J*
    | Posted on 2008-06-17 12:46:23 | by wickedwoman - [ Reply to This ] -



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