--Elite Writer Alias: Colin Douglas Name: Colin Skilton ASL: 49/male/Redhill,Surrey.UK Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 3901 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 1 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4268 D 11.69 Years 1.17 Decades 142.27 Months 609.71 Weeks 4.268000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Go on smile i dare you!
I know what type of poem you were trying to write. It's called a Pantoum and you almost correctly followed its rules that state all quatrains except the first, have the first line of the current quatrain repeating the second line in the preceeding quatrain; and the third line of the current quatrain repeats the fourth line of the preceeding quatrain. You just missed doing so with line 5.