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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Colin Douglas
    Name: Colin Skilton
    ASL: 49/male/Redhill,Surrey.UK
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    glad you found my meagre suggestion worth while...but i confesss it seems to read betrter now. I hope this day finds you well..
    Koster
    | Posted on 2006-12-24 00:00:00 | by koster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for you wonderful words of encouragement regarding "march of the snowflakes".
    God bless
    john-paul
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comments on "Lost Knight." A most sorrowful sight, no matter which level you choose to read this on, the knight, the lover, the man. How insightful of you. Thanks again.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by phil askew - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    you are very welcome and merry christmas to you too...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by redeemer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment and the encouraging words.

    john-paul
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Colin,

    I know what type of poem you were trying to write. It's called a Pantoum and you almost correctly followed its rules that state all quatrains except the first, have the first line of the current quatrain repeating the second line in the preceeding quatrain; and the third line of the current quatrain repeats the fourth line of the preceeding quatrain. You just missed doing so with line 5.
    | Posted on 2006-12-08 00:00:00 | by tagit - [ Reply to This ] -



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