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Favorites: 87 Forum Posts: 11 Shoutbox Posts: 8 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 2073 D 5.68 Years 0.57 Decades 69.1 Months 296.14 Weeks 2.073000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Rest inside of the dark shelters, away from the light that has lied to me for all of this time, blessing upon the crest of the darkness that has swollen mel, I lose hope, I lose trust, I lose life.
thank u for ur repsonse on the others. at least u have two jobs man. the reason why i wrote that poem is because i have been unemployed for quite some time now and i am unable to find ajob. i have an unstable work history, i hav ebeen in and out of college and i have been arrested, but i ama good person and i mean no harm, but it definately looks otherwise. and those of us who have had these hardships are definately sufering, so that is why i wrote this poem. thank you and the best of luck to u and ur girlfriend. me and my partner are going thru a similar situation, my partner just lost a job, i am unemployed, i am going thru a huge depression- it can show in my poetry :-)
i look forward to reading more o fur poetry i have read many of them and i will comment on more of them, my mind is just going thru such a whirl wind of emotions i cant sem to consentrate today. good luck to u and ur situation once again.
Thankyou for your comment on "Guilty or Not." It is a fact that no one knows how one would behave in another persons lifestyle from birth, different parents and enviroment. But God knows all, -- the things that smack us about can help us grow if we fight on against adversity. I'm glad you appreciated the poem. Ted.
Thanks for your reply to my comment, so few reply it makes me think I am just pissing into the wind. I thought your write was most likely written about someone you knew, rather than about yourself. I pray that good vibes surround you. Ted.
by the way i thought about workig @ a funeral home as well @ one point, but i thought i was too 'weird' anyhow for that, i am too morbid and that would make me even more morbid. just wnated to add that lol. thanks once again.
Thank you for your response to my poem. I wrote that poem a while ago, and I can't quite remember what it was about lol- but i do know i was really sad at the time. I have gone through major depression the past couple years, and recedntly and sometimes my words could be sad. thank you for your response, i greatly appreciate it.
ES isn't really a networking site unless you're into that community. Really, the entire internet is a network, but separated into categories. This would be a Poetry Network, while sites such as Myspace and Facebook and Twitter (so useless) are Social. Not many people (out of billions online) are into poetry. The chatbox is pretty cool. But it's not for everyone.