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Crutch, Thanks for taking time to read, "Marching in the Rain," and to write such a considerate response. That one received very little attention, and that's probably because its directed towards a very small audience, but you picked up on nuances that reflect our regular life where no others did. Thank you kindly for your words.
looks like you did something tro Game of years...it reads smoother or else i have gone crazy...the poem now presents rather seamlessly,,,kind of elegant in it's honing in on the heart of the matter. great to read.
I'm such an idiot; I made the same typo twice. The word that I meant to write was “Armour” both in the title and at the end of the piece. It does not make much sense otherwise. Does it make more sense to you know?
I agree with the redundant or superfluous quality of some of my ideas. I know I have to make some adjustment and I will definitely take into account what you have said on that account.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my piece. I truly appreciate your having done so.