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    Crutch,
    Thanks for taking time to read, "Marching in the Rain," and to write such a considerate response. That one received very little attention, and that's probably because its directed towards a very small audience, but you picked up on nuances that reflect our regular life where no others did. Thank you kindly for your words.

    ~Jen~
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by Jengrr - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    looks like you did something tro Game of years...it reads smoother or else i have gone crazy...the poem now presents rather seamlessly,,,kind of elegant in it's honing in on the heart of the matter.
    great to read.

    Koster
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by koster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I like indents! Don't you? I do.
    Thank you for the comment!
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm such an idiot; I made the same typo twice. The word that I meant to write was “Armour” both in the title and at the end of the piece. It does not make much sense otherwise. Does it make more sense to you know?

    I agree with the redundant or superfluous quality of some of my ideas. I know I have to make some adjustment and I will definitely take into account what you have said on that account.

    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my piece. I truly appreciate your having done so.


    Wishing you well,


    Ethan.
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the heads-up on the meter problem with "divided." Can't say I like "forked" but will see what else may work

    Yeah, I didn't liked 'forked' very much, either, but it's what came to mind. It has a whole different connotation to it. I'm sure you'll come up with something better. mae
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by mae - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    YOU READ PRUDENCE DODD! Yea! I thought my Pru was going to remain commentless!

    “walked through the door” presents a slight glitch for me, I think I take the word “through” to literal.

    Yes, I'm afraid you're just going to have to get over that. I looked at it and nothing else fits!

    I'm so glad you liked my little story poem. They are my favorite kind of poetry. I'm going to be posting one in a few days in honor of Hallowe'en about a werewolf.

    I will be back later to review your posts.

    mae
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by mae - [ Reply to This ] -



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