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Mood: WHAT THE FUCK????????????????
...Created 2006-12-03 11:24:09 [ View Past Journals ]
WHY?
WHAT DID I DO THAT MAKES ME SO DIFFERENT?
DIFFERENT ENOUGH TO BE JUDGED BY THE CONFORMISTS AS AN INSANE INDIVIDUAL...
WHY?
WHAT DID I SAY THAT MADE HER HATE ME SO MUCH?
SO MUCH THAT SHE COULD SEEK THE COMFORT OF ANOTHER'S ARMS IN MY OWN BED?
WHY?
WHY DOES THIS LIFE TREAT ME THIS WAY?
WHY MUST I SWIM WITH THE STREAM? CAN I NOT REMOVE MYSELF FROM THE EBB OF LIFE AND WALK THE BANKS OF THIS RIVER AND IT'S RESTRICTING BOUNDARIES?
CAN I NOT COMPLETELY SHUT OUT THE MADNESS WITHIN MYSELF AND CURL INTO A TINY BALL OF NOTHING IN THE CORNER OF MY OWN MIND?
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH ME?
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?
WHAT THE FUCK???????????????
WHAT DID I DO THAT MAKES ME SO DIFFERENT?
DIFFERENT ENOUGH TO BE JUDGED BY THE CONFORMISTS AS AN INSANE INDIVIDUAL...
WHY?
WHAT DID I SAY THAT MADE HER HATE ME SO MUCH?
SO MUCH THAT SHE COULD SEEK THE COMFORT OF ANOTHER'S ARMS IN MY OWN BED?
WHY?
WHY DOES THIS LIFE TREAT ME THIS WAY?
WHY MUST I SWIM WITH THE STREAM? CAN I NOT REMOVE MYSELF FROM THE EBB OF LIFE AND WALK THE BANKS OF THIS RIVER AND IT'S RESTRICTING BOUNDARIES?
CAN I NOT COMPLETELY SHUT OUT THE MADNESS WITHIN MYSELF AND CURL INTO A TINY BALL OF NOTHING IN THE CORNER OF MY OWN MIND?
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH ME?
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?
WHAT THE FUCK???????????????
...Created 2006-12-03 11:24:09 [ View Past Journals ]
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| Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, I am glad you liked it :)
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| | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| You should post your journal up as an entry because I felt a lot of emotion and I would really like to comment and suggest something for it...
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| | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Twisted - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Oh my god, you really fav. my stuff and let alot of comments that brightened my day. I mean, I don't think I've met anyone on this site (besides Vampiric Death, dismentled, Ygi, and Venia) who understands my passion, and my repetition of symbolisms because I think that's what absorbs people in, if they're able to relate and understand what the hell you're talking about.
I find that you not only encourage people to continue to write, you bring forth emotion that people who've read it didn't realize was there. Authors purposely leave you with a final word to think about, and very few are blessed to be able to read into the author's meaning and the true message under there. That's what I try to do, and I find that great minds so think alike, because you can actually dig down into it's core with my writing and your writing and you're able to break the mirror-like surface and brave the depths beneath, so if anyone reads this, then you know that DEATHISMYMUSE's writing is awesome!  Thank you Dallas for being a friend, and a great fellow writer. You're a talented writer, keep it up! |
| | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Twisted - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| I don't think I told you, but I really appreciate you commenting on my "tempest...caress" poem, I found that your comment brightened my day! If you like this one, I think you'll like "Evade," " The Tree", " Until Reality Intervences," " Mockingbirds don't sing," and/or " Arrogant, Dreamer of the Forest's Illusions"
But I'll comment on your stuff too, and just tell me when you need comments and I'll comment! |
| | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Twisted - [ Reply to This ] - |
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