--Elite Writer Alias: DaleP Name: Dale P ASL: 50/M/TX Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 11 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 954 D 2.61 Years 0.26 Decades 31.8 Months 136.29 Weeks 9.54000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman
loose the bonds of sanity
slip into black waters
grope blindly in the deep
and visit the eternal keep
let the wait of paranoia
smother you to sleep
then dream of the others
they will tell you a tale
of all the twisted fates
of melancholy madman
and chimera guarding gates
loose the bonds of sanity
Just quietly slip away
Daaalllleeeee... Remember me? Of course you do! How could you ever forget the one you love to tease?
Is it bad when I answer my own questions?
...Meh. Anyhow, I was wondering if I could beg you to read my latest little poem. It's called Stay Awhile, and I'd really like your input. Of course, I'll read something of yours in return. Duh.
Okay, Thank you for the comment on "Holding my breath." I really enjoyed it. I don't mind that you find my anger amusing. I often do and I liked the way you edited it (even the censor bar). Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.
Briannan
Well, I found your comment actually quite helpful... hopefully I'll get enough down time while "down-range" to work on it more. I'll be shipping out to Afghanistan next week.
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