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    Journal:
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    Mood:
      

                   the fresh breath of environment, surprises,
                   bringing the world to me.
                   vacillates. instantly.


                   
    elsewhere. an aspect of that fluctuating
                   nill + constant



                   i know for certain, there, is the path to work.
                   there,


         is that
    unremarkable
    path


         

                   all beside it.




         imagined.                                                                                                              




















    ...Created 2017-02-17 15:04:19     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Thank you, Daniel, for your comments on my "Before" poem and for the editing note. Nice catch! That was sloppy of me. I'm glad to have fixed it. I'm so happy to hear it moved you. Also, thank you for taking time on my ant poem. I have thought about what you said. If I'm understanding you correctly, you would like me to play more with the idea of what the iconic figures I mentioned might say in relation to Christmas or to the idea of being in the moment.

    Deepak Chopra didn’t have to tell him to maintain a dynamically active consciousness

    DL doesn't have to remind him that vision leads to action

    Buddha readings aren't necessary in order for him to avoid dwelling in the past

    JC's teachings won't make him compelled to care more for the well being of others

    ???

    That all seems overly explicit to me. Maybe that isn't what you meant at all or maybe I'm just not getting it "right" in my attempt to do it. Please let me know. I am open to a concrete example.

    Thanks again for taking the time.
    | Posted on 2017-02-18 23:34:21 | by JanePlane - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Daniel, for your kind comments on my poem, "TheDaily Supernatural". I wrote it when my mom was dying and my sister came to my rescue from halfway around the world on a moment's notice.
    | Posted on 2017-02-12 18:17:16 | by annie0888 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! (Yes, I'm shouting) I'm sure it seemed like a simple thing, but it wasn't for me. I'm not sure how I can give you back ten minutes of your life. Maybe, I can post ten minutes worth of super heartfelt videos and songs to show my thanks. Or, a super sincere from the bottom of my heart thank you, is worth the ten minutes? Vikings is my all time favorite. Love that series so freaking much. Love Ragnar and Lagertha. Love it so hard, Lol.
    | Posted on 2017-02-10 01:48:30 | by Chelebel - [ Reply to This ] -
      

    | Posted on 2017-02-10 01:39:17 | by Chelebel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I hate to keep bothering you about this. Wait let me back up, thank you for explaining how to do that. I still am unsuccessful. I don't have a digg option. I have twitter, Facebook, google, email, sms. If I copy and remove s it won't post video. If I click email it takes me to sign in on a google email Acct. so you think I'm having issues because I'm not using a pc? Again I know it's not your bother. I appreciate you trying to help.
    | Posted on 2017-02-09 01:54:58 | by Chelebel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    My worst nightmare happened. Oh no! It wasn't that bad. I'll take it. Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful critique. I will also consider that giggles make you shit. Lol! Do little giggles give little shits? I thought to use giggles because I wanted it to appear trivial. Bring a light heartedness to all the heavy things that were going on. And yet, if you would like to know, that line was heavy provided you knew where my head was. "Destiny marked by little giggles" was a direct reference to a baby's giggle. If I changed it to squiggles it would imply sperm, to me at least. Is that what you were saying? Is my head in the gutter? I didn't think you meant it that way, I don't know though. I feel encouraged and inspired by your critique and for that, I thank you. I will consider a doodle site, although, I do tend to use my journal for that. I appreciate you and the time you took to offer up a positive and encouraging word. I think I will try to work at it a little more and see what it morphs into. Also, maybe you could help me? I was told to remove the s from the https:// when posting videos and it would post the actual video. It hasn't worked for me. Could you tell me how to do that? If there's a secret password for the answer, well I'm not sure 🤔, lol.
    | Posted on 2017-02-08 02:03:58 | by Chelebel - [ Reply to This ] -



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