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    Mood: Bam
      





                   Consider the context of current.
                   Why such a thing should exist.
                   From what intelligence - life form struck.
                   Waking itself. shaking itself in little droplets,


                   Traveling - welling.
                   layer on layer
                             Or lying supinely flat













                                                      who knows why water makes land?










         

         it must



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    Thanks, Daniel. Your comment just made me feel a little emotional. You have also been a good friend to me when it was sorely needed. I’m glad to know you (still). I look forward to seeing where a relearning takes you with poetry. I’ve felt pretty dry for a long time, but I have been working on my family tree and have found out so many interesting things that I feel I could write a book now. If I only have some time. I never thought of poetry as a thing that moves in waves and evolves like birds who are insensible of their changing when I started, but I can see now that it is.

    Thanks for your friendship.
    | Posted on 2018-09-21 19:11:42 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It’s good to see you writing. I still enjoy (find inspiration in) reading what you’re working on, or have worked out. I see on my page I’ve been here a little over six years. I still remember the first poem I posted here, and how important it all seemed to me then. So much has changed in the intervening years, but I still enjoy the same things here (on your page) as I did in those earlier, easier, more optimistic (naive?) years of mine. I do find it harder to discuss, and life is so much different (busier) now for me. I’m sorry I don’t say enough about it, but I still learn from what you’re doing here when you do it.

    Hope you’re well there.
    | Posted on 2018-09-20 22:17:57 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Daniel. You hit exactly on some of the reasons I'm happy with it myself. I've had poetry where I've attempted to write about something, this experience for instance, that failed, because I was looking at it wrong. There's a few on the same subject that are just too head on. I was reassured to read this one back and be satisfied with "yes that's the feeling".

    Also now I put these ' fellas in there it's even closer ha.

    Thanks for reading Daniel, hope your well.
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