--Elite Writer Alias: Daniel Barlow Name: UY G Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 0 Life Story: [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 79 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1914 D 5.24 Years 0.52 Decades 63.8 Months 273.43 Weeks 1.914000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman [ Communicate asdf ] Recent Favorites: Twapandula Angola by Lady of Shalott the backs of hands by Awkward Stephen Hero by Raphael Caesura by Lady of Shalott Jonquils by Andz View all Faves [ + RSS ] [ + Google It ] [ + My Yahoo ] Currently Stalking: Raphael, Lady of Shalott

Journal: -------------------------------------------Mood: The Usual    Hey :) I just completed the lyrics, melody scrogmoggin for my first song on the album project I'm working on. I think I'll call the project 'slow rising' which is a nod to Swell Season since I really get into the way they pace their songs. Song 1. I can touch you Watch the writerscafe site for eventual posting of audio. As a public service announcement I'll add that I'm not much of a singer. good good. ...Created 2009-11-16 23:57:53     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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How would pretending my lover is frigid [censored] change the piece? I do not fully understand what you are suggesting here?

| Posted on 2009-11-22 12:48:59 | by Clayman - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the input on "Slip Away" do you have any suggestions to improve upon it?

| Posted on 2009-11-22 02:51:33 | by Clayman - [ Reply to This ] -

Daniel -- Thank you for reading/reviewing 'Twapandula...' and for being honest. You confirmed a lot of what I thought about the write. The deeper I got into it, the harder it was to write about it. I rushed it, but being able to get it away from me provides some barrier so that I may tackle it again -- which I look forward to. I guess, too, I realize that to write about this is to write about something very big and I feel...unqualified, not necessarily in skill, but experience. I don't know. Bleh. Though really, the comment is a big help. And extra thanks for faving it. Apart of me wants to say 'not yet!' but it means a lot. -Emeya

| Posted on 2009-11-21 08:39:34 | by Lady of Shalott - [ Reply to This ] -

you are right. and i have madeamendsthankyou... you will notice the changes and as ever, they are not likely to be the last but it pleases me that you relate to the central theme: one that i observe daily with much interest. you owe me some lines; or a refinement. i am patient. take it easy d, k

| Posted on 2009-11-17 04:42:31 | by Awkward - [ Reply to This ] -

Leave the kids with me we'll probably build a fort and tell ghosts stories (I have plenty) and keep the realistic fairytales on the down low so that they will only be scared of their closets and not jaded by humanity or too hopeful for soulmates. Thanks for the comment on 'the parachutist.' Prose is a lovely medium that I keep meaning to do more with, but I have a trouble with endings. That one seemed to close alright though. :) Take it easy.

| Posted on 2009-11-17 00:46:21 | by Lady of Shalott - [ Reply to This ] -

It’s a bit tricky to be a comment hunter when there is nothing to comment on don’t you think? Plenty here though, I have to learn to log in here at some point before elsewhere, so I don’t have to prioritise between what I must do and what I would like to do.. oh well there is always the evening.. I’ll be back

| Posted on 2009-11-16 17:29:34 | by Andz - [ Reply to This ] -

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