--Elite Writer Alias: Daniel Barlow Name: Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 5 Life Story: The human harmonic [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 98 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 162 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5107 D 13.99 Years 1.4 Decades 170.23 Months 729.57 Weeks 5.107000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: a magnifying glass on my own limitations
As much as I would like to lie and say who me? Never.
Truth is I love reading your work and I visit a lot. However, I have a little beef about you all of a sudden becoming a secretive poet. I can only read four of your works. I suppose you want it that way for reasons that are unreasonable. A secretive poet. That doesn’t even make sense, It’s like a fisherman who doesn’t handle raw fish. Or wait it’s like a sailor who gets sea sick. Or hmmm.... a jockey who doesn’t wear a jock. 😂
Hey Daniel, just wanted to say thanks for the comment on my poem a while back there. Its pretty difficult actually, as in I'm wary of making things willfully obscure, but there was no intention to there. Still it's a hard one even in view of what I wanted to get across. But you get at it in a way i'm very happy with:
"I like the way this poem moves through senses or backs off into consciousness so that all way way through it is there and not there. To me, when a person writes, they can be so on point,"
It is like that. The sword in the water is something I've had in my head that I focused on in times of, shall we say difficulty. Strong difficulty.
It's repetitious and elusive.It's the solid cutting through what breaks for it, and neither really being able to give. And it has sound to it, a ring to it. And then there's what gets given utterance.
Hey, I saw you tried to call earlier. We were furniture shopping and then I had to do all my evening Mom duties. Closing on a new house tomorrow and then probably beginning to move at the weekend. Just finishing up a really hard class and feeling right beat.