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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Dark Dann
    Name: Daniel Cordero
    ASL: 18/ Male/ San Diego
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    Life without meaning. Hope without reasoning.

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    Currently Stalking: Sachiko, TsukikoHamino, SweetAndOhSoME

    Journal: heh....
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Scornful memories, things we couldn't take.
    Look into my eyes, an accidental kiss.
    Left shaking in a memory that was never meant.
    Your white flesh, gleams.
    In a pathetic wish of dreams,
    I gaze upon your brown eyes;
    fingers lost in your hair.
    It meant nothing, but my mind digresses.
    It was the world to me, I have to confess.
    As you travel, thousand of miles,
    I'm left shaken in your wake
    Tormented by memories that I made.
    All I wanted was something I couldn't have;
    All I wanted was....

    Chances are, it'll never happen.
    A romance in the making; it just never started.
    Look in the mirror, a simple reflection.
    The heart still feels the dream;
    and it feels so damn real.
    You should have left dead and gone;
    but I'm still here,
    feeling so cold.

    Eh, fuck it. This is a response to a poem made by BC Beneke called "A Tiffany Moment". I tried to copy his style ( I know >.>) If anyone wants to compare it please PM me.

    By the way, none of the things in the poem is any true. My mind doesn't linger in that past anymore xD


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    What makes you different? Because even when you feel this way, you get right back up. What makes you unique? That you realise so much, yet keep forging ahead. Your cries don't fall on deaf ears, Jimmy, or you're talking to the wrong people.


    What makes it worth fighting for? ... What doesn't make it worth fighting for? The one you love, the chance of happiness, to be the best thing possible; you. (Don't scoff, or roll your eyes, mister.) So many other different things- and you know that. You do know it.


    If history keeps repeating itself, then you should know by now how to correct it. You should be able to see the signs, and learn from past scenario's and apply it to the now. To thrive from the repitition.

    Heaven and hell can be the same, Jimmy. Heaven can be a hell if you're just not happy. To be happy with anything, you first have to be happy with yourself.


    Word the wise; insane people do not believe they are insane. They see themselves as normal, their own way of thinking as truth. You 'seeing' the line of sanity and insanity is okay in many ways, Jimmy. It means you're worried about yourself.

    I'm sorry I can't spin comforting words like you, and I wish I had some clever line of eye opening proportions.. But, I just have my humble self. I hope I helped, or at least made you smile, or really anything that isn't a bad mood. That'd make it worth it. Keep your chin up Jimmy, you deserve happiness, even if you wont accept it or realise it yet.


    sincerely yours and an open ear,

    Elias.
    | Posted on 2009-11-19 15:05:54 | by alovesuicide - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Why can't anyone see that the guilt is mine and I deserve it?


    -scoffs- Doing nothing wrong?


    You're perfect, y'know.


    Brilliant.
    | Posted on 2009-11-19 14:30:35 | by SweetAndOhSoME - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    God forgive mine.
    | Posted on 2009-11-19 14:06:27 | by SweetAndOhSoME - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I love you, Daniel Cordero. :)


    You're a good brother, a good guardian, a good son, a good friend, and the very best boyfriend ever. <3
    | Posted on 2009-11-16 16:28:25 | by SweetAndOhSoME - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I know you’re not talking about me in your journal, Danny boy. Because if you were talking about me, you’d be dead. :)

    Oh, and P.S. Growing up is overrated. At least, growing up by most people’s definitions. Of course, you know that, don’t you, honey? *cackles*
    | Posted on 2009-11-13 13:17:28 | by SweetAndOhSoME - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I do Dan, you should know this. You are an awesome person adn if anyone threatens you, they will have to go through me to get to you.
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