--Elite Writer Alias: DavidHirt Name: David Hirt ASL: 29/M/Chicago Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4534 Life Story: Born.Living.Reaching [ Ignore User ]
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So... I've been in postulancy for three weeks now. I'm keeping a record of it at www.kingpoets.com. It can be found under The Knights of the Round table. The Forum is called The Coffee Shop. My handle is Cappuchino, and you don't have to be a member to read it.
I haven't been here as much either, but I do try to check in every once in awhile to look for new posts from Jace, rws, you, Irina and a few others. What site have you been visiting? I have been to one a few times called eratosphere.ablemuse. I am also taking a live face-to-face poetry workshop which has been really great.
for some reason the comment box wasn't coming up. i thought 'elokim' was terrific. yuo did a nice job. you might think about expanding it, just a thought. also, i think you should begin the 2nd paragraph with 'she.' nice job.