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    Name: Dominque Brown
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    Journal: I'm.. Around
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    Mood: Traveler
      
    Work, work work.. seems thats all I've been doing lately.. Along side taking care of my almost 2 year old (oi, that boys growing like a wild flower). Time to wrtie is like that wondering blur you catch out of the corner of your eye from time to time. Life's busy and now with summer here... It's only gotten worse. Somedays I wish there was a mini-vaca button. where you could just stop everything and be able to do nothing.


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    Featured: Lunatic Fairy Tale

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    Your alliteration in Who Killed My Constellation? is freaking fantastic. I couldn't leave a comment so I thought i'd tell you here. I really liked that piece, and have no idea what the other two comments were thinking, I found the flow easy to follow couldn't see anything wrong, except that I love it and want more of its' word play.
    But I digress, have a good day.
    | Posted on 2013-10-29 20:03:32 | by Zai - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    this is way late, but thank you I am glad someone understood it.
    | Posted on 2013-10-01 05:45:18 | by SetmyselfonFire - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i like that..."morbid metaphor"

    if you don't mind, i might incorporate that into a piece....???
    | Posted on 2012-06-15 09:14:06 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    that makes sense about the last line, dominique...but you need to change the word in the line then to "waiting"

    it reads "wait" and is confusing....

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-15 09:06:41 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you, Dominique, for the comments on "Barely Audible Ballet"---

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-05-17 00:55:00 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for adding "tin roof rusted" as a favorite.
    | Posted on 2012-04-13 23:33:43 | by OlMrTerrible - [ Reply to This ] -



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