--Elite Writer Alias: DeeBaby6389 Name: Dee B. ASL: 18/Female/Virginia, USA Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 36 Life Story: Hard. [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: Life Sucks -------------------------------------------
Mood: Confused
I am just so confused about life in general. I know that things "pay off in the future" and you should "work hard now so you won't have to later" but I'm a teenager. Teenagers thrive off of instant gratification and I get none. I hate consequences and I hate that I feel like I'm the only one who pays attention to them. People never considered what effect their actions will have on others. It's hard to imagine becoming a "responsible adult" when I don't even know anyone like that. What's so good about living anyway, it's just constant pain.
thanx for the comment on the good die and crazy
It wasn't really story though. It was more of a poem or some lyrics and whatnot. ha um yeah but thanx for the critique
Hi Dee...tyvm for praising 2 bits of writing, even though you disagreed with them at their very core. I was impressed that you could disassociate yourself enough to be able to critique fairly, let alone positively, given the obvious passion some people ( ie you...lol ) have in this subject.
The only things I would add are that MOSTLY the two poems represent where I was in my life a while ago, and now things may not seem as cut and dried as they did back then.
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