--Elite Writer Alias: DeeBaby6389 Name: Dee B. ASL: 18/Female/Virginia, USA Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 3196 Life Story: Hard. [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: Life Sucks -------------------------------------------
I am just so confused about life in general. I know that things "pay off in the future" and you should "work hard now so you won't have to later" but I'm a teenager. Teenagers thrive off of instant gratification and I get none. I hate consequences and I hate that I feel like I'm the only one who pays attention to them. People never considered what effect their actions will have on others. It's hard to imagine becoming a "responsible adult" when I don't even know anyone like that. What's so good about living anyway, it's just constant pain.
Hi Dee...tyvm for praising 2 bits of writing, even though you disagreed with them at their very core. I was impressed that you could disassociate yourself enough to be able to critique fairly, let alone positively, given the obvious passion some people ( ie you...lol ) have in this subject.
The only things I would add are that MOSTLY the two poems represent where I was in my life a while ago, and now things may not seem as cut and dried as they did back then.