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    Name: Dee B.
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    Journal: Life Sucks
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    Mood: Confused
      
    I am just so confused about life in general. I know that things "pay off in the future" and you should "work hard now so you won't have to later" but I'm a teenager. Teenagers thrive off of instant gratification and I get none. I hate consequences and I hate that I feel like I'm the only one who pays attention to them. People never considered what effect their actions will have on others. It's hard to imagine becoming a "responsible adult" when I don't even know anyone like that. What's so good about living anyway, it's just constant pain.


    ...Created 2007-05-18 11:24:58     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Page 88 of My Autobiography
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     It's Worth It
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    ::Love : Class : Prose :
     Falling
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     Trust
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     Dream
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     Wake Up
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     I Love You
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     Empty
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     Now What
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     Real Love
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     How Real
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     Alone
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     Whisper
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     Can't Wait
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     The Way The River Flows
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     Broken
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    Thank you so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much for the comment. ROAR!
    | Posted on 2008-03-21 14:02:11 | by Sparkster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for the comment on the good die and crazy
    It wasn't really story though. It was more of a poem or some lyrics and whatnot. ha um yeah but thanx for the critique
    | Posted on 2007-10-02 06:53:49 | by xSaraHx - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Dee, Thank you very much for your comment; I'm glad you liked it,
    It was just something I had to get off my chest.

    Thanks again,
    ~Matt
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 14:55:21 | by forfila - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ty dee, just feeling a bit low, and that kinda epitomised it all.

    nice to hear from you

    love

    ben
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 15:27:00 | by Ben Gunn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Dee...tyvm for praising 2 bits of writing, even though you disagreed with them at their very core. I was impressed that you could disassociate yourself enough to be able to critique fairly, let alone positively, given the obvious passion some people ( ie you...lol ) have in this subject.

    The only things I would add are that MOSTLY the two poems represent where I was in my life a while ago, and now things may not seem as cut and dried as they did back then.

    Great to hear from you

    love

    Ben
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 17:55:57 | by Ben Gunn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ty Dee for your comments on the writers block thing.

    glad to see that you are looking forward to your new found freedom.

    hope it treats you as well as u deserve


    peace'n'love'n'stuff

    Ben Gunn
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 15:36:46 | by Ben Gunn - [ Reply to This ] -



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