DeepDreamer2008

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Alias: DeepDreamer2008
Name: Deep Dreamer
ASL: 17/F/UK
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Days Away: 65
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Favorites: 2
Forum Posts: 6
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RP Posts: 0
Signup Date: 1031 D
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Poetry is the revelation of a feeling, that the poet believes to be interior and personal, which the reader recognises as his own.

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Cancerous Demise

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Featured: Cancerous Demise

A Kiss in my Sleep
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

Cancerous Demise
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::Death : Class : Poetry :

Sweet Sixteen
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::Nostalgia : Class : Poetry :

A Teenager's Vow
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::Being a Teen : Class : Poetry :

All I've Learnt
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :

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| Posted on 2008-04-27 08:31:51 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi there,

You are welcome and I am glad if I were able to help a little.

I hope you had a good vacation.
Viviane

| Posted on 2008-03-31 02:58:02 | by babyblue002 - [ Reply to This ] -

thank you so much for your comment on black lettered spiders and loose legs. i did mean my girlfriend, not a literal baby, if that helps the interpretation at all. and i took your suggestion and changed the wording a bit in the sections you mentioned, thanks. they were good ideas, and i hope the word alterations help the flow of the stanza.

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i'll be sure to read some of your poetry as well, come back and critique some more whenever you feel like it. thank you again!

~sabrina.

| Posted on 2008-03-11 21:47:02 | by icaughtfire591 - [ Reply to This ] -

Dreamer '08, Thanks for the comment and compliment. I took your advice and changed the 'I am..' to I'm. I see you deleted 50 writings, whats the deal? Regardless I look forward to reading some of your pieces.
Take care,
-Kyle

| Posted on 2008-02-26 23:01:06 | by Broken Halo - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey thanks, I'l give that some thought and edit as it need to be I know, that write is in total reverse and that might be why it appears to not make sense, but oh well.

Again thanks and I'll get by soon, perhaps the weekend

| Posted on 2008-02-26 21:30:29 | by Andz - [ Reply to This ] -

Don't worry about being late.

Well I already told u I know nothing about meters and I just go by instinct in that field. As for "ones", I have no better idea either that is why I kept it.
As far as rhyme goes, I think I have had enough experience with it. I just started experimenting with free form. and most of the time I let the poem flow as it wants to, if it is rhyming then all good, if not then no rhyme.

I always liked rhyme too, so I totally get what you are trying to say, not to mention it makes the poem more of a challenge within the rhyme's restriction.

You will see with time, that I judge each piece on its own, if I compare with other works it is just because it can make my idea go through better. I don't read any piece with expectations. I also cite my own experience as example it does not have to mean you are the same.

Alia has an outstanding talent, I am very familiar with her style and I have seen her grow along the years I have been on ES. She always has a nice surprise in her bag.

But I still think you have a voice of your own and that you are capable of writing some really amazing pieces.

Take care
Viviane

| Posted on 2008-02-26 11:26:05 | by babyblue002 - [ Reply to This ] -

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