--Elite Writer Alias: DemonofHeaven Name: Frances Ortiz ASL: 18/Female/Indiana Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2 Life Story: Hard Life [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 13 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 54 D 0.15 Years 0.01 Decades 1.8 Months 7.71 Weeks 5.40000e+6 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Death is darkness but it can sometimes be the light to a solution.
Yesterday during school some maroon decided they were going to hit my friend's arm. She has cancer and just went through chemotherapy. If I wasn't 18 I swear I would have gotten in a fight. It frustrated me even more that she didn't know who it was so I could at least yell at them. I swear if people can't been nice to the sick they have no right to live.
In response to your message, anybody who holds an opinion for a reason is bias; it's not an insult. And I don't recall suggesting you were ever in trouble with the law. Perhaps you could reread my comment. Good luck with the parents. And the government.
Id be really badass if that were true,but actually youll find (if you actually look) that many people on this site give rude comments,
I once saw a member called "sicko" (or something) who actually prided himself on the fact that he was so ready to say peoples work was [censored],like his oppinion had extra weight,that he forgot his own work was terrible but thats neither here nor there...
to him,his nasty comments were more important than his poetry
I dont profess to do that at all,people can bash my poems all the time,they have Im sure
and my comments arent rude,theyre honest,I always try to find something I like,but if the poetry stinks so bad that its un-redeamable,and there is such poetry up here,I will say so
ALWAYS,because thats what critics do with real poetry
if on the other hand I like it,I will ALSO say so,and never in a crap "wow I was really blown away,your so deep,I love your flow way",because I hate those comments too,
its rare you can actually say to someone up here that they have real talent,because most people dont,but if they do i tell them
check my last few critiques and then tell me Im not balanced
Oh and...
Clogging up the submissions page is about the rudest thing you can do on elite skills,
I was putting it nicely before,but I dont care if people go out of their way to comment on you,that was just for your ego
but your pushing other peoples work out of the submissions page,
I can submit 20 poems a day and everyone will be forced to read my crap
In response to what you said about my "Rose's Thorns" poem.....it was because I kinda felt like I was the problem and that there was something I had done to make her not wanna tell me. Plus I was just gettting some left over emotions out from different things that have happened......and I still am.
Yeah, I know the feeling of what you were talking about. Loving someone so much that you try to protect them by telling them to stay away from you is VERY hard to do, but I had to do it over the summer. I had to make Mia hate me so that she could move on with her life, but that failed and we dated again in August, and then I did the same thing in September and that time it worked. I got another girlfriend and now she no longer views me the same way and she can finally move on from me completely (hopefully). I'm really sorry and I don't really see how you could deserve this pain, but then again, like you said, I don't know your past, but I still don't think you deserve it. You're too special for that.
Well, today hasn't been that great of a day. I've been slightly pissed all day, and I'm not sure why exactly. Part of it is because Mia and Matt(my best friend) are friends again, despite all the anger he expressed to me yesterday about her.....I have forgiven her, but I still feel anger when I'm around her. I think it might be because I bottled all that up over the past couple of months, but I don't know. I'm just kinda confused and angry......it's weird.
Have you ever noticed how alike we are? It seems like I'm always saying to you "Yeah, I know how you feel" or "Yeah, I've been through that too." It seems we have led similar lives.....I'm glad I met you on here.
When you submit three poems at a time it pushes everyone else down the list so they dont get comments,but it wont gain you any extra recognition,itll just make you seem pretentious,its greedy
someone will then come along and tell you,
like this...
Lots of people do it,but I wonder do you know its frowned upon?
Id be more likely to comment if you submitted one at a time,and that way you get more insight into the poem because the feed-back isnt divided
Well, I read your journal, and I must say it hit me pretty hard. I don't even know what you look like, and we're barely friends considering we haven't even seen each other, but just thinking of you crying has broken my heart. I'm SO sorry that whatever happened has hurt you this much.....I'm really, really sorry about that and it's not even my fault. You don't deserve that kind of pain......and I'm here for you if you wanna talk about it at all.
Well, that poem I wrote, "Rose's Thorns" was just a poem I wrote because I was in a terrible mood that day. Things in my life are actually going pretty well for once and I'm taking advantage of the break in the darkness. I have a piercing light in the form of my girlfriend, and I'm so happy I have her. I was just REALLY upset that day becuase I thought she was hiding something from me, but I was wrong and everything was worked out.
I am somewhat mad at my ex, however. She had tole me and my best friend Matt that she had quit smoking, and we both believed her. Well, a couple of weeks ago, Matt caught her smoking and it REALLY angered him and it frustrated me. He and I both are still upset with her over lying and a few other things that are not vastly important but have built up over time, like her attitude to certain things. But other than that things really are fine.
Well, I really enjoy talking to you and getting to know you, and I really, really hope that things will look up for you in the near future.
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