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Thanks for your comment on 'Happy Face Please'. It was a little difficult to write-- I wasn't feeling particularly angry at the time.
As for your punctuation suggestion: I was trying to go for a frenzied feel by leaving out punctuation. Like there's no room to breathe, or something. Still, I'll definitely reconsider.
Thank you again for your feedback, it was much appreciated.
thanx for your comment on my second this is [not] home selection.
#7 was dictionary definitions and i felt it kinda put the whole series into context somehow.
#8 it was a line that 'he' asked me the night we met because he was convinced that i would have been with someone else and that if he was caught with me he would be maimed. it makes sense.
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