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    oh I didn't mean to imply that the poem itself was a mockery. I meant to say, it's describing how people may mock and degrade certain beliefs.

    but yeah, whatever.
    | Posted on 2007-08-13 13:22:25 | by Venia - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey there depdem,

    it makes me happy to read someone enjoyed reading my newbie....

    Be careful if you do try it, you might turn like i had and really enjoy drinking the JD...

    thank You for showing me the error in that stanza....
    i wasn't sure if i needed to put a cap on spirit i'm glad you told me...

    you are right it did take time to put together...

    the dictionary and thesaurus have been keeping my mind busy reading and reading till i find what words i want to use...

    Thanks a bundle depdem
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 23:27:27 | by deluka - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on 'Happy Face Please'. It was a little difficult to write-- I wasn't feeling particularly angry at the time.
    As for your punctuation suggestion: I was trying to go for a frenzied feel by leaving out punctuation. Like there's no room to breathe, or something. Still, I'll definitely reconsider.
    Thank you again for your feedback, it was much appreciated.
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 18:30:15 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for your comment on my second this is [not] home selection.

    #7 was dictionary definitions and i felt it kinda put the whole series into context somehow.

    #8 it was a line that 'he' asked me the night we met because he was convinced that i would have been with someone else and that if he was caught with me he would be maimed. it makes sense.

    thanx heaps for checking it out
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 01:05:16 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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