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Thanks for your comment on 'Happy Face Please'. It was a little difficult to write-- I wasn't feeling particularly angry at the time.
As for your punctuation suggestion: I was trying to go for a frenzied feel by leaving out punctuation. Like there's no room to breathe, or something. Still, I'll definitely reconsider.
Thank you again for your feedback, it was much appreciated.