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thanx for the kind words. 'alone' was not a typo. you can certainly take it the way you did. your viewpoint's entirely valid. i didn't quite see her that way. i saw her as more of a seeress, misunderstood by those around her. the last part you did get exactly the way i intended. thanx again.
I could totally bake you cookies for your comment! AMAZING! I have always felt that the poem was lacking or…just not good enough. It has changed a lot since I first wrote it. And your insight has really helped me to see where I can improve. I also like your suggestion of changing the title.
As for your thoughts on what its meaning is. It has several and your insight was one of them.
lol Best rambling EVER I enjoyed it. I wish my dog smelled like fresh laundry. He's getting pretty icky, these days. (Before last month, he hadn't had a bath in about seven years. That was no good.) I bet she looks stunning in that bandana. What color is it?