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| Posted on 2008-09-14 07:53:55 | by Shuurinakisame - [ Reply to This ] -

no problemo... food for thought.

| Posted on 2008-07-23 09:03:07 | by discombobulated - [ Reply to This ] -

Every poem that I read is like a morsel for the soul.

| Posted on 2007-12-31 22:01:34 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for the detailed analysis and positive comments on haiku poetry titled:If We stumble or Fall. Regarding the 2nd line - "Sweet blue rain wash away" The sweet blue rain is the "God light" that cleanse the soul from hurt and pain received in life. Fate takes us in different directions in life. Sometimes we receive a bad deck of card in our life's journey. At this point, you have fallen down on your knees calling for God's love and mercy. Sweet blue rain is a sensation making you whole again. somehow, we shed our skin an regenerate to live in new environment. It is similar to a Holy Baptism, washing our sins away and accepting the Lord. So, there is a spiritual aspect to this. Well, I think it is difficult for readers to make this connection. However, if the reader gains a positive good from this Haiku Poem, then we are communication new ideas.

| Posted on 2007-12-30 11:44:01 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. This season is a killer. Anyway... what were they thinking? I don't know... maybe... they were just doing what they can to be beautiful. Not much of an answer is it. You're welcome for the comment.

| Posted on 2007-12-27 22:23:34 | by ANGELO - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey Mike, Thanks for your comments on "So Worth It" and I'm glad you broke down the Haiku in order to fully understand. ~Mykquillion

| Posted on 2007-12-27 15:01:19 | by Mykquillion - [ Reply to This ] -

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