--Elite Writer Alias: Drizzt Name: Jestar Cormane ASL: 18/M/CA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 588 Life Story: what are you, a cop? [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 17 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1457 D 3.99 Years 0.4 Decades 48.57 Months 208.14 Weeks 1.45700e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "What place is this, that I call home? These are my people, by skin and by heritage, but I am no kin to them. They are lost and ever will be." -Drizzt Do'Urden, Homeland
Well, i havent been on this site in a few hundred days so i figured i'd come back...I'm in a creative writing class now in my senior year of high school, so i figured since i'll be writing a lot of poetry and the like in that class I may as well post some of my stuff on here...I'd like to get some feedback on the things i write since all works are works in progress and this sounded like as good a place as any outside my class to get some actual input
Actually, my poem "Darkness comes at Nighttime", was more about myself. For a while, I was extremely depressed. This is kind of what my therapist told me.
You're welcome. I couldn't help reading your journal. Creative Writing classes! How I crave for one of those. Over here, we're stuck with the stiff English Language/Literature syllabus. Few AS level students taking English actually plan on putting their knowledge into a poetic challenge. Ah well. Good luck with your classes and the revision of 'Her' if you decide to revise it.
Thank you for your comment on Walk the Line. I understand what your saying. It's just hard sometimes, to be strong all the time. Sometimes I am weak, and for good reasons too. Thank you though I do appreciate the up lifting spirit.