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    Well, i havent been on this site in a few hundred days so i figured i'd come back...I'm in a creative writing class now in my senior year of high school, so i figured since i'll be writing a lot of poetry and the like in that class I may as well post some of my stuff on here...I'd like to get some feedback on the things i write since all works are works in progress and this sounded like as good a place as any outside my class to get some actual input


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    *But, I also find the emo outlook annoying. Yes. Sorry, I forgot to add that, lol. I wasn't trying to discrimanate.
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Jazzy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Actually, my poem "Darkness comes at Nighttime", was more about myself. For a while, I was extremely depressed. This is kind of what my therapist told me.
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Jazzy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh, and I like what you did with "line 24" your way was better. So kudos to you on that. Good call.
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by leftof_red - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    What up man. Thanks for the comment on echoes...I apreciate the love. I dont have much to say about the piece. It is what it is. Thanks though.
    Lefty
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by leftof_red - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You're welcome. I couldn't help reading your journal. Creative Writing classes! How I crave for one of those. Over here, we're stuck with the stiff English Language/Literature syllabus. Few AS level students taking English actually plan on putting their knowledge into a poetic challenge. Ah well. Good luck with your classes and the revision of 'Her' if you decide to revise it.

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    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on Walk the Line. I understand what your saying. It's just hard sometimes, to be strong all the time. Sometimes I am weak, and for good reasons too. Thank you though I do appreciate the up lifting spirit.
    | Posted on 2006-08-23 00:00:00 | by Cinder7 - [ Reply to This ] -



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