--Elite Writer Alias: EileenToTheLeft Name: Eileen Doe ASL: 23/f/va Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 35 Life Story: ha [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for takin the time to read gibberish. Sorry if it's been a while I'm not around much anymore; busy exploring facebook. I don't write much anymore it seems like a chore and I'd rather do parkour or anything but sit still.
Thanks for the comment and your time spent on Natures Laws. But where are the "some places where metre drifts?" One place I have amended is S.7. L2, "coupling" is now "love-making. Dialect is that reason, -- I and most people I know, say it as coup-el-ing, not cup-ling, which causes a metre bump, so I changed it! So where are the others so I can edit them. Ted.
I see the last post on this page was 2007 so I am probably right in thinking I might have encountered you or some of your work before, or some comment on a poem we both found.
Having read through a few of your poems I see there's consistency and potential on top of high quailty. I'm gonna stalk you: I have different reasons for stalking people but with you I think I'll learn to drawer from the top drawer and try to offer something else as well.
It's strange because as I read I encounter many of the thoughts that have been in my head and so in a strange way you are the bite of reality in that I lose some of that feeling of being unique? It's also cool because in a way I can learn to be more objective about my own writing through exploring yours. I hope you'll pardon the ventured similarity.
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