Thanks for the comment on "Black Holes- The Beginning" It is actually about the big bang theory making it so that an invisible being controls it after getting bored. Really enjoy your insight and comments hope to hear more from you.
Thank you for your comment on Caged Soul. We are all shadows in this life... it is just a matter of embracing it and being able to live with it... as for the path for a shadow, it knows no way... for it must always lie within the darkness in the soul clouding the roads and the choices we make... one way or another... we just end up prisoners of these choices... we build our own cages until the day we die... the day we are released from the confines of the flesh... Once again thank you for your comment I truly enjoyed reading it.
Thank you for your thoughts on "Sparks" I appreciate the kind words and I am glad you could connect to the poem, I always love it when the audience feels the emotions within themselves when they rea/listen to my work. I like making imagry through my poems I have a tendency to do it a lot and you picked up on them well. Like I said I am pleased you enjoyed it and I am grateful for your thoughts. I shall look forward to reading your works!
Thank you for the comment on Sister Moon. I really enjoyed reading your interpretation. I also liked that you could connect to Mercy. We all have these kinds of questions, and the answers are important, but nobody is really sure what the truth is, or sometimes even what the best answer is. I guess what I wanted to get people to think about was how invested they actually are in their relationships, and if what they think they feel is what they really feel.
Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems! ^_^
Yes, "I tried to forget you" is definitely one of my better attempts at poetry. When I write something as good as that, I am extremely happy.
In "Robin", I did mean "worm", not "warm". It wasn't a typo. "And yes, my heart is a worm for him" is the line. I used it right after the previous line of him 'stabbing the earth for worms' in order to show that the robin stabbed my heart, that he captured my love with his wonderful ways.
Again, thanks for taking the time to read them. Much appreciated!