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    Journal: One less of
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    Mood: Stressed
      
    Their hard words rang through out my ears.
    Where pushing turned to shoving.
    Thats not okay! Its never been okay!
    I turn my face away in shame.
    I knew it was wrong.
    The words only continued to grow.
    Their hands reaching out to push me down.
    Knocking every last breath from my lungs.
    He stood in front of me.
    So I hear you are a fag?
    I stood and turned.
    Ignoring the words.
    He reached out and grasped my shoulder.
    His hands hot as hell.
    Burning through my skin.
    My back slammed against the lockers behind me.
    I clenched my teeth.
    Oh, is the fag gonna cry?
    He laughed.
    My eyes met his.
    They grew hot.
    The tears spilled over and ran.
    Down my cheeks they fled.
    Im sorry.
    My voice soft and terrified.
    Oh, the little fag boy is crying!
    Their laughter grew and became omniscient.
    One
    Last
    Crash.
    My head flew against the locker.
    I felt the lock dig into my skull.
    Blood spill.
    Laughter.
    My eyes closed.
    He dropped my body.
    I better not turn into a fag now.
    My breath slowed.
    My body grew cold.
    My lips turned blue.
    They walked victoriously away.
    Laughing.
    They won.
    I lost.


    ...Created 2009-02-23 19:09:19     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Your journal entry is... heartwrenching. I had a hard time not punching the screen and crying simultaneously.

    Slainte,

    Banshee
    | Posted on 2009-04-28 18:13:27 | by Shadowstar13 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You should post your journal entry. It says something about the masses that few might want to face but everyone should understand.
    | Posted on 2009-02-24 20:08:37 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Come back and post some more stuff. Please.
    | Posted on 2008-11-21 17:22:08 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You're welcome, ma'am.
    | Posted on 2008-10-31 17:45:16 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    you still post stuff?
    | Posted on 2008-10-22 00:13:58 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i thank you for your comment on "As I Go" but at the same time, though you have a very valid point, at the time i wrote it, i was a 12 year old fool comming of his adhd pills. nastalgic eh? i dont intend on trying to fix it, but if you would like more in depth, and non depressed adolescence work, i would advise taking a peek at my poem "Us and The Music".

    thanks again,
    ~Rob
    | Posted on 2008-10-16 04:13:56 | by ThisIsReal - [ Reply to This ] -



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