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Thanks a lot for your comment.
The things you noticed missing were on purpose, the one on the first stanza I think I should've put it though. And the lack of detail was so that whoever read it could add his or her own detail to fit himself, I guess its somehow an experiment :P
I really apreciate your comments
thanks for the comment on the way i am. it is actually a staement on bopth racila ethinc groups and sexual orientation. that's bacically why it has to be so vague. as for the abrupt change to we it's bacically a realization that i am not alone there are other like me and that there is strength in number. i guess you could say it's a statement saying that there are more thatn just me and that there are strength in numbers.and that we will prevail in both all aspect in which people are discriminated against. Thanks. Georgina
Shonen - great to hear from you! I must say - your journal is interesting today. You've a style that's unique - you've been able to integrate right-left brain perspective into a statement so androgynous I couldn't say if it was written by a man or a women. It's really intelligent though - no exaggeration. You want "Arsonist Redux?" Check out my best and most over-looked work, "Arcadian Nimbus." A lyrical concern about the hypothetical death-by-suicide of Barbie. By the way - justice may be blind today, but the actual statue had eyes until the beginning of the 16th century. Who or what took away the lady's vision? Now look into that, will yah?
I read your previous journals and now I'm not clear about your gender. I'm one very straight hetero male caucasian. I'm only going down if they can sink my ship, and I fly the only real black flag on the sea. Stay vigorous, kid. Mick