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It might have been an idea for me to check out your page fully before commenting :)as I was going on the basis of that piece alone. I'll do a crash-course in your work in the next little bit.
Happy Friday! I haven't been on a lot but I saw you on Sharon's page and I just wanted to shout out some love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
ps: which new site are you on that's "refreshing"
A million years since I was on the site so delay in responding apologised for. didn't use "scoffing" becauseb my made up word (poetic licence) "scoffering" suited my rhyme scheme.
Thanks for the comment. I knew someone would say that, I was going to take the "Glad/sads" out of it but I doubted some people. I probably will change it. I'd say give it another chance to see it without the glads and sads. I'm not begging you to come back and look at my poem, just a poet trying to exlpain some work. You shouldn't of judged it because of two words repeated.
thanks for the comment, I'm glad you actually got the rhyme scheme cuz when I read through it a couple days after writing it took me awhile to pick it up again.