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    *Uber gasp* You're an old man!
    | Posted on 2010-03-10 16:19:19 | by Black Angel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I read some of your poetry and must say, I might just start stalking you . . .
    | Posted on 2009-10-31 21:14:35 | by Scaredheart - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Wow...thank you so very much...you not only read but you inquired and really left your thoughts behind. So for that I cannot thank you enough.
    Ok...so the Q'n'A...
    Why was the silence naked?

    I wrote it that way for the simple fact that some silence can be so deafening it leaves you feeling naked and raw.

    Did you purposely choose crater like over
    crater-like?

    Yes, for no more of a reason then the fact that I wanted separation, as that was what I was feeling between us.

    Is there a reason the only "I," used as a personal pronoun, that you capitalized is the start of the second stanza?

    Only that at that very moment I felt like a fool...feeling like I had the wool over my eyes and I'm big time allergic...for the rest of the poem I felt small and wasted and that one line was my empowerment.

    I'm happy to have someone take the time to really read and understand and ask...
    THANK YOU.

    Kelly

    | Posted on 2007-08-20 22:16:57 | by clay - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    *Oh dearie me, have I been quoted about what my English teacher told me about the Haiku so long ago?

    wowwww*

    I don't know. Have you? (What are you talking about?) mae
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 14:18:26 | by mae - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It's a complicated feeling in the poem. I didn't want to make it easy for people. PArt of it is to let them just read it and experience it as a happening. A moment... an instant of real life and make them think about it. About life and eros and thanatos.
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:42:45 | by DavidHirt - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I wasn't trying to make them terribly noticeable rhymes. ;) Sonnets are old hat for me and I've learned to enjamb them so the rhymes aren't harsh.
    | Posted on 2007-03-28 23:53:55 | by DavidHirt - [ Reply to This ] -



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