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EternitysLyre

Name: Jonathan Jou
ASL: 20/M/Taiwan.
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Days Away: 973
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"Ephemeral dreams and perpetual ire; Melodious lies from Eternity's Lyre."

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Where Wishes Perish
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A Little less Than Human
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Smiles in the Ripples
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On Raven Wings
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*Uber gasp* You're an old man!

| Posted on 2010-03-10 16:19:19 | by Black Angel - [ Reply to This ] -

I read some of your poetry and must say, I might just start stalking you . . .

| Posted on 2009-10-31 21:14:35 | by Scaredheart - [ Reply to This ] -

Wow...thank you so very much...you not only read but you inquired and really left your thoughts behind. So for that I cannot thank you enough.
Ok...so the Q'n'A...
Why was the silence naked?

I wrote it that way for the simple fact that some silence can be so deafening it leaves you feeling naked and raw.

Did you purposely choose crater like over
crater-like?

Yes, for no more of a reason then the fact that I wanted separation, as that was what I was feeling between us.

Is there a reason the only "I," used as a personal pronoun, that you capitalized is the start of the second stanza?

Only that at that very moment I felt like a fool...feeling like I had the wool over my eyes and I'm big time allergic...for the rest of the poem I felt small and wasted and that one line was my empowerment.

I'm happy to have someone take the time to really read and understand and ask...
THANK YOU.

Kelly

| Posted on 2007-08-20 22:16:57 | by clay - [ Reply to This ] -

*Oh dearie me, have I been quoted about what my English teacher told me about the Haiku so long ago?

wowwww*

I don't know. Have you? (What are you talking about?) mae

| Posted on 2007-03-30 14:18:26 | by mae - [ Reply to This ] -

It's a complicated feeling in the poem. I didn't want to make it easy for people. PArt of it is to let them just read it and experience it as a happening. A moment... an instant of real life and make them think about it. About life and eros and thanatos.

| Posted on 2007-03-29 00:42:45 | by DavidHirt - [ Reply to This ] -

I wasn't trying to make them terribly noticeable rhymes. ;) Sonnets are old hat for me and I've learned to enjamb them so the rhymes aren't harsh.

| Posted on 2007-03-28 23:53:55 | by DavidHirt - [ Reply to This ] -

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