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TYVM for the great comment on solar system, and yeah, I was in a mood most foul writing it... I thought I'd thrown a 'polky-dot' dress over that part to distract, but yes... there are times I could really do without sun or moon and go mole, iykwim.

| Posted on 2009-11-07 22:03:37 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi Ethan. I have revised "I am Reflection' and I think it will be more readily accepted. It is quite difficult to revise and keep the same sense. How do you find it? Regards Joachim.

| Posted on 2009-10-03 09:24:48 | by Joachim - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your very in depth comments on “Reflections….”. It is greatly appreciated. The “doors” are symbolic in this that there do exist to my mind many ways that lead to “Heavens Door” where perfection is to be found. Well that `s according to my Faith actually. The Alternative Religions that I have studied all aspire towards such perfections and to attain that state of mind, there do exist many doors that can lead one towards such a cultivated state of mind that will in itself lead to perfection in Time and Space and of course the never ending infinity sequences. All my work is symbolism in structure and in thought because that is what I am. Mostly leans over to Gnosticism's. The Shadows are that side and doors of us that are closed to others and reflect the “sin-side the evil side“ of man and not that what we have done or are – actually. Without Light there is no Darkness and so on. I agree the final stage needs attentions and lots of it. I wrote the whole poem is about 20 minutes flat and sure does need attention. The reason for that is the reason why you commented on it – to acquire more in depth thoughts from readers. Thanks for that you are helping a lot. The numbers are symbolism as well. We have five senses not seven. If you will, check-out the Numerology concepts. We have seven Auras and 11 is one short of the perfect symbol 12. So we are still imperfect in reflection toward the highest quality to be obtained. Some doors not found yet and still closed. It of course also rhymes well together or should I say “chimes well”. Thanking you again for your valued insights. Will check you work as well. Blessed Be, Joachim. (My spellchecker left me astray and I am not English and apologise for mistakes ;-) jm.

| Posted on 2009-08-21 11:07:14 | by Joachim - [ Reply to This ] -

Haha. Your actually very right. After that line, “married boys just like their daddy…” I got brain locked. I hate how that poem turned out. I couldn’t think of an ending so I wrote the first thing that came to mind. I sold out. Ha. You’ve inspired me to delete it and wait for inspiration. Ill show you the final copy if I ever decide what the real ending should be. My view on love? I think its like a drug. Its lovely and it feels nice and it kind of dulls the pain. But its dangerous and it destroys people if they aren’t ready for it. I know a girl whose dated the same guy for about 6 years now. he beats her, he beats her friends, hes going to beat their kids, and she doesn’t care, shes still going to marry him, because she loves him. That’s not romantic its sick. You have to be strong, and wise, and ready to let go of it if you know its not good for you. But after that first little taste, most people never want to stop, even if it kills them. Loves a scary little thing. But im a pessimist about this kind of stuff, of course there’s happy endings too. I think its just wise to wait and not jump into relationships just because you want a fix. Not sure if any of that made sense. My metaphors get a little vague sometimes. But good luck on your search. Hope you find her soon. Peace. kt

| Posted on 2009-08-18 23:23:21 | by Theophilus - [ Reply to This ] -

thank you, Ethan. I really appreciate your thoughts and critique. I couldn't agree more on your correction, my bad :D. poetry isn't exactly my thing, but hopefully I'll get better with great advice, like yours. umm, exactly what do you mean to "be careful with line breaks"? I think I completely butchered commas in that poem, hehe. same to you, Cheers and warm regards! :) thanks again.

| Posted on 2009-08-17 10:51:45 | by kumabox - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey mate, Cheers 4 your comments on "Scrawl". I didn't think u were on here anymore, nice 2 see you back! I am amazed you'd never heard of limericks. I have learnt a lot about 'em recently, so if u have any questions, just let me know...The key is getting the metre right. Oh, and let me know if u submit one and I'll have a look at it! Alex

| Posted on 2009-08-15 09:36:55 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

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