--Elite Writer Alias: Ethan Brody Name: Ethan Brody ASL: 35 - M - Chile Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 304 Life Story: Getting experience [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 11 Forum Posts: 20 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5537 D 15.17 Years 1.52 Decades 184.57 Months 791 Weeks 5.537000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow, creeps in this petty pace from day to day, to the last syllable of recorded time; and all our yesterdays have lighted fools the way to dusty death. Out, ....
Hello, I'm from many places. It's a shame you didn't get to read my older pieces. In a manic spur I erased them all. I'm sure you would have delighted in my younger, fresher mind.
Your comment on my untitled piece wasn't my favorite. I meant more that, with all the attention played out for me, the world has ignored the messages I had for them. Now that I got them listening, however, there is no more substance than when I was a newborn.
Regarding the word "passive", I mean to say more like "turning the other cheek", which you could equate with ignorance, but I would say it is more of a lifeline with a deliberate kind of evil.
Hey Ethan - I just now saw your comments on my moon poem. And I agree with your suggestion. The line breaks were there originally because I was making it into a shape poem, but that didn't translate when I posted t here. And I like your way better anyhow! Thanks!
Thank you, Ethan, for your words on my poem, "After". I'm not sure it was all that artistically crafted. . . it is just me expressing sadness for a dear friend having lost her son. And yes, my grief is in there, too. Not just over his loss. But over the "loss" of a friend who will never be the same. Thanks again for reading AND for being brave enough to comment. I thought no one ever would for a while there!