hey thanx for the comment...but the parenthesis are needed throughout because it is actually two writes...the parenthesis is a message in itself or the poem can be read all together ...usually i don't write like that but theres a reasoning i did it that way and it was meant for only him to understand...so yea...lol..but thanx i really do appriciate your suggestions...purps
Yeah, yeah, yeah- I can delete anything, not the point. What's said remains said. Anyone in their right mind should be offended by an emo comparison.
It's put a black-mark on music in general, talent and good old-fashioned depression.
Sadness can't be anything but trendy or played-out anymore...
And how would one ever find the term "generic" as flattering?
I have no problem taking a critique. I've taken the advice of several people, who liked or hated my works... But they were still established. They'd proven themselves- if even only in the eyes of others on this site.
Even if I thought their $hit sucked, their opinion still mattered... a little. They understood enough to make a point, you do not...
What made it truly offensive is that you were brand new, knew nothing about me or other things I'd posted, came in with this out-side, predetermined attitude... And are going to try to tell me something? And something wrong at that, stand by it or not... You really more judged the poem, than reviewed it.
If you'd have left those comments on different works, ones that even I was iffy on, then that would have been a welcome push to get those reworked. To make them better (because that's why we're all here) but, quite frankly, the two you did comment on are nothing short of perfect. I'll be vain about it, I don't care...
You post a bunch of submissions right after one another, that you've obviously already had written--- you're just looking for a fan-base. You already think you can write, you just want the confirmation and ego-stroking that goes along with it.
I hit and miss, I know this. And if I miss- I'll admit it, but the hits? Well, I'm going to go ahead and be a dick and say; you're wrong. And that's not an opinion. It's a fact.
Hmm. I always rely on the new comers to need some help in their writing. Haha, as horrible as that may sound.
However, I've looked through some of yours and you... Well you know what you're doing. I really like what you've accomplished with your style.
So I guess all that's left to say now, is, welcome to Elite Skills. :)