--Elite Writer Alias: Eyamma Name: Elizabeth Morgan ASL: 16/Sry, I'm taken/Alabama Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: A Thing Called Love [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 16 Forum Posts: 7 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 20202 Signup Date: 337 D 0.92 Years 0.09 Decades 11.23 Months 48.14 Weeks 3.370000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Remember, life is like a jump rope. Up down, up down, up down. It will get hard.
Journal: Fire -------------------------------------------
Mood: The Usual
Woke up to a brand new skyline
We licked our wounds and mourned the dead
Swallowed the story, hook and sinker
Is that what we meant, when we said That we never would forget
Are we fools and cowards all
To let them cover up their lies
'Cause we all watched the buildings fall
And watched the scales fall from our eyes
A fire burns beneath Manhattan
Still we breathe with broken lungs
We act like none of this matters
Is that what we meant, when we said That we would sing what must be sung
Are we fools and cowards all
To let them cover up their lies
'Cause we all watched the buildings fall
And watched the scales fall from our eyes
We want answers
Scream from the roofs
We want justice
We want the truth
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Without pain, life is not worth living
We're all demons today
Come down and feel the pain
It burns straight through you
And makes a hole in your soul
I don't care what you've been told
And now I carry you
And as a soldier of misfortune
An ultimate doomsayer
I want you to feel
And I know you will
And everything you see
Will bleed straight through
Reveal the truth
Anything can happen, you say
I never tried to get it
I never tried to fit in
And now I'm falling through
Fire...when ready
Ready...
Fire!
I'm human too you know
Everything, soul's dead
I'm human too you know
Talented, scavengers
I'll hold you down, you'll be my bait
I'll throw you to my slaves
I'll stick to my lies
And everything is shallow
I know there is no use to pray
I am a demon today
We're all demons today
We drown in soil, we're flooded
As it happens
I still try to be human
I never tried to fit in
And now I'm falling through again
Ah... I've been lost without you Eyam... I truly have.
Life is good, just got told might have a new job, get my license back right quick. Just got rid of the psycho now (ex) girlfriend. So things are looking up.
No, i understand you submitting it completely, and feedback is always a good thing. Do not be shy to show anything that you think you should. If you were to look through my poems you would see that about half of them are written in the same venting style as yours. It is always good to fish for advice, because they are words to grow on.
"Have I told you lately that I love you.
Have I told you there's no one else above you.
Fill my heart with gladness, take away all my sadness.
Ease my troubles, that's what you do."