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umm..sorry if you got that impression form my poem "i wonder" but that is NOT what i was trying to say. its more of hte fact trusting another person. and when you love someone, yes, your life does depend on them. maybe youve never been in that type of relationship, but its the feeling of wondering what will come of it, the relationship. sometimes a smile is all it could take to make your day so much brighter. my poem was about wondering if you can trust that person in your life. it takes a lot to trust someone, especially when every other guy has abused you. thanks for dropping my tho...its nice to hear from other readers.

| Posted on 2007-01-18 18:51:41 | by butterfly_chi5 - [ Reply to This ] -

thaks for the comment, on, I had a new dream. I post a lot, and I'm always looking for comments, so please keep commenting :P I'll take this chance to deviously look at all your stuff. Wishing for more ~Brian

| Posted on 2007-01-16 20:10:29 | by Imadjinn - [ Reply to This ] -

yeah i guess i'm alive, i've in jail for awhile and other stupid [censored], but that write you commented on this is for no girl, i pretty much said [censored] girls, no offsense to you or nothing you know. I just said i stick what i better at is being a player. some of the things i'm righting is for a cd i,m putting toghther, just to see what happends. talk to u later

| Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by theman - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey! You're the first person that has taken one of my poems as their favorites!!! I'm honored, and I just thought I'd let you know. Thanks a lot! ~Faintshadow

| Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by FaintShadow37 - [ Reply to This ] -

Hello, thanks for your comment. I did appreciate you sharing your thoughts on my poem. It is always nice to get someone else input. Thanks again.

| Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Angel_Sin - [ Reply to This ] -

Thankx for ur comment on Ice and I will take ur ideas into consideration. However I don't know if I will change it or not because sometimes it is the illogical things and the contradictions that make the poem good to begin with. U know those little imperfections that make something beautiful. Srry it took so long to get back to u.

| Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by ForsakenAngel - [ Reply to This ] -

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