--Elite Writer Alias: FaintShadow37 Name: Jessica !!! Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 5066 Life Story: shwa [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 9 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5502 D 15.07 Years 1.51 Decades 183.4 Months 786 Weeks 5.502000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "He shall wipe every tear from their eyes, and there shall be no more death or mourning, wailing or pain, for the old order has passed away." -Revelation 21:4
Thanks for comment on 'Bluebell's Plaid'. I know, this sort of poem is hard to criticize eh? Sorry. But dead easy to write - if you study its simple elements a bit ...
Hello Faint, Jessica, Many thanks for your kind words about my poem 'Childs Prayer. I liked this one too beacsue it reminds me of a young lady who used to sit on my lap while i was writing poetry many years ago and told me i should write a childs prayer. She is my Neice Hannah and is now 18 and living in Florence Italy and i am hoping to see her this Christmas. So whenever i read it it reminds me of her. Best Wishes Colin Douglas.