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Falling Rain


Name: Samantha Heresy
ASL: 17/f
Website:[ Website ]
Days Away: 5289
Life Story: Not so tragic.
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Signup Date: 5799 D
15.89 Years 1.59 Quote:
...and kisses are a better fate than wisdom... e,e.cummings


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Mood: Frustrated
  
Pleases, if you read my stuff, leave a comment, even if its telling me how bad i sucked, k?

Thanks,

Sam


...Created 2007-01-13 22:47:23     [ View Past Journals ]

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 I Crave To Be The Abstract 8/18/07
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The poem is pretty much about the horrible reality of war and dying on the battlefield. The soldier realizes he is dying and that there is nothing he can do now, so he gives in and accepts it:

"May this wet grass kiss my life away"

Now that you know more about it, you probably realize that it is a pretty strong message.
| Posted on 2007-10-16 10:39:10 | by manwithnoname - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the comment on 'goodnight, sweetheart' glad you liked it:)

see ya around
V
| Posted on 2007-10-15 14:59:59 | by Vastmark - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your comment on "The Day of Forty-Four Sunsets". The flower is actually a flower. In the story, the Prince has a flower on his planet that always seems to demand attention. But in this poem, the sunsets are so beautiful that she forgets herself for but a moment.
| Posted on 2007-10-15 08:06:48 | by manwithnoname - [ Reply to This ] -
  
hey sam!

thanks for the comment. it wasn't really meant to be a good piece. I just wanted to get some emotion out and hope that maybe it might be decent. lol. but thanks for taking the time to read it. .


Bren
| Posted on 2007-10-14 20:15:46 | by Day DreaMeR - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your comment on 'Distance.' I agree with you about the word suggestion another commenter gave. I appreciate you giving feedback.
| Posted on 2007-10-14 18:13:24 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Rain? You there? Hi. I'll explain why I died in a PM or something, really busy, I'll talk to you in a bit. I'll check for PM's or comments or anything, just write me if you would! Please!

J.E. Bond
| Posted on 2007-10-03 01:01:58 | by Acid - [ Reply to This ] -



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