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    nice.
    i like your style. i just cant do it

    ~annie
    | Posted on 2008-05-29 16:59:33 | by annie smith - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Firefly,

    I normally don't try and tell writers what to write but since you asked for my opinion, I would say I liked the 1st one best. I like it for its simplicity and I think it fits most with the ideas/message you were trying to convey.

    Thanks,

    Jo.
    | Posted on 2008-05-29 14:34:15 | by JoKing - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    There's nothing to thank me for; I enjoy reading your work, it makes me think harder than it's supposed to, I believe.

    All of it is very well done.
    | Posted on 2008-05-23 07:46:05 | by Khosi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I like it. Your idea that is. Feel free to comment on any of my stuff as well. I have one, a 3 part sonnet that I have not yet posted but it has elements of your broken wing poem.
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 11:33:36 | by Immortalis - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Many of your poems I have related to and loved, so please take no offense that I didn't particularly like one. A few that I have liked, but I have not read all so I'm just giving examples are:

    Words Shall Speak
    Its Time For Me To Live

    and many more. The one I commented on was a good poem, but it just did not move me or stick with me as some have. But nice job anyway. You're a really good writer.
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 13:58:04 | by BeautifulSoul - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    My reply to your river song was just a thought I had after the read. The addition of my lines to your work is perfectly ok with me. That was not my original intention. I just got carried away with the way you stated the work. I always like to read you. Your works are so mind bending .
    | Posted on 2008-05-02 23:24:23 | by realpoet - [ Reply to This ] -



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