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    Mood: resless, but don't want to do anything
      
    Merry Meet Everyone!
    It's been awhile... yet again. Any-who, I come to you all with tidings of good will and new poems. I must warn you that they are a bit old for me, but on here they are new.
    Feel free to look at whatever poems of mine that you would like. So in saying... Merry we met, merry we part. May the Goddess lead you on the path to true art.
    Blessed Be.


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     A New Life: Shield Against Despair
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    Hi. Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you (my computer has a virus, so there's only so much I can do on it), but I really appreciate the comment and favorites add.

    I understand exactly what you meant, and I've decided not to change anything. I now like it as it is (so thanks ), and I'm glad you do too.

    I'm going to go try to read your stuff now. If it doesn't work out, I'll be back tomorrow.

    Thanks again!!!
    You're too awesome.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 22:53:06 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on 'Understand Death'. Any compliments or constructive criticism is always appreciated. I look forward to reading some of your work. Take care and keep writing.

    -Kyle
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 23:27:05 | by Broken Halo - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on Long Drive Home. I'm glad that part stuck out the most to you, the part about removing the fingertips from the wheel, cause that is the part that I liked the best too, it was suppose to be about feeling stuck in life, like you feel like you are going nowhere cause you think there is nowhere to go, and the heat is suppose to be like realizing there is something else out there and it might just be better than where you are right now. But I like how you thought of it as a rebirthing, that was an interesting outlook on it. And sometimes its fun to think into things too hard, that's the great part about being human we can imagine.
    Thanks again for enjoying it
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 14:49:26 | by kcasey - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment and the fave! Really.

    See you around!

    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2008-01-30 23:26:52 | by Azuire - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ya, it's ok... i prefer showing, not telling. it was about my crazy weekend... wildly dancing barefoot with others to a reggae dj out in the countryside, blind-drunk from too much whisky... then looking up at the stars, realising how insignificant i am... before falling asleep in the grass. and before that, looking for a waterhole under the moonlight. "derangement of the senses": look up that term if it interests you... arthur rimbaud and jim morrison were proponents of it...

    anyway, sorry to ramble.
    | Posted on 2008-01-30 21:27:37 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment, and you are right, that poem wasn't my very best poem that I have created on this site, my poetry needs to make sense again, or else it'll all be the same. Keep in touch
    | Posted on 2008-01-30 15:37:52 | by Crestfallenman - [ Reply to This ] -



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