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Name: Wayne Liu
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Happy new year. 2007.

A fresh beginning, isn't it?


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I wrote a few new poems, so please stop by to read poems titled:Love Goes to Heaven & Shed Thy Skin

I need fresh eyes for this.


FireFly747
| Posted on 2007-11-18 20:30:18 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hello

Creative writing is something great and yet very much untouched. Please feel free to drop in.

Rash Publishing
http://www.rashpublishing.com
| Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by RashPub - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Okay, I scrapped the the poem titled, "Color Me" and I will go with my intuition and instincts and rewrite it.
| Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for comment on goldfish poem but you know, I already know it's OK in fact I love it to bits. Need to get criticism or at least hear details about why a reader is pleased. You gave a "generic" comment which is very kind but a waste of time.
| Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Your comment about "Dawn and Midnight Kissed" is well taken. I put "her God" to draw attention to the fact that it was not any of the Roman and Greek gods being referred to. We as Westerners familiar with the Incarnation know which god is being referred to, but to those unfamiliar with the scene of That Night will see that "her god" was not any of the mythical gods upon research by either text or by word of one familiar with.
I hope this makes for better reading and understanding.
| Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by realpoet - [ Reply to This ] -
  
First, I would like to wish you and family a Happy Thanksgiving Holiday Season!

Are you suggesting that I go with the original poem which is the following:


"Colour Me"


Joy comes in the mourning, and you color me true
You coloured me red, and you coloured me blue
Crimson red sunset reflects
in indigo eyes
Orange blossoms planted
in soft maple hair
Lavender sky dancing
on sugar plum clouds
Olive green corn stalks resting
on a Kansas farm
Curious black crows
wake a wan scarecrow
Ruby red slippers click
drag me kicking home
If you colour me bright, and you colour me bold
Paint me some new colours, love, just green and gold



Should I scrap it and start over again? The original ideas comes from the story titled, Wizard of Oz


| Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -



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