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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Happy new year. 2007.

    A fresh beginning, isn't it?


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    I wrote a few new poems, so please stop by to read poems titled:Love Goes to Heaven & Shed Thy Skin

    I need fresh eyes for this.


    FireFly747
    | Posted on 2007-11-18 20:30:18 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello

    Creative writing is something great and yet very much untouched. Please feel free to drop in.

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    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by RashPub - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Okay, I scrapped the the poem titled, "Color Me" and I will go with my intuition and instincts and rewrite it.
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for comment on goldfish poem but you know, I already know it's OK in fact I love it to bits. Need to get criticism or at least hear details about why a reader is pleased. You gave a "generic" comment which is very kind but a waste of time.
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Your comment about "Dawn and Midnight Kissed" is well taken. I put "her God" to draw attention to the fact that it was not any of the Roman and Greek gods being referred to. We as Westerners familiar with the Incarnation know which god is being referred to, but to those unfamiliar with the scene of That Night will see that "her god" was not any of the mythical gods upon research by either text or by word of one familiar with.
    I hope this makes for better reading and understanding.
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by realpoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    First, I would like to wish you and family a Happy Thanksgiving Holiday Season!

    Are you suggesting that I go with the original poem which is the following:


    "Colour Me"


    Joy comes in the mourning, and you color me true
    You coloured me red, and you coloured me blue
    Crimson red sunset reflects
    in indigo eyes
    Orange blossoms planted
    in soft maple hair
    Lavender sky dancing
    on sugar plum clouds
    Olive green corn stalks resting
    on a Kansas farm
    Curious black crows
    wake a wan scarecrow
    Ruby red slippers click
    drag me kicking home
    If you colour me bright, and you colour me bold
    Paint me some new colours, love, just green and gold



    Should I scrap it and start over again? The original ideas comes from the story titled, Wizard of Oz


    | Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -



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