--Elite Writer Alias: Fun-E Name: Smith Smith ASL: 19, m, KY Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4932 Life Story: Fun-E [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 48 Signup Date: 5041 D 13.81 Years 1.38 Decades 168.03 Months 720.14 Weeks 5.041000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: There are three things, I can never remember ......... DANGIT!!
Dan, its time for me to come out in the open... I wrote a story about you today... I'm sorry if its not what you wanted, but if you're story wont help others... this world is hopeless... I know you can hear me... reguardless of wether or not you can process my words... I'm sorry, for everything...
Dear God... why couldnt I have been put in your place... you had so much going for you... I was a highschool shuffle who was barely getting out of class with a passing grade, which you helped me get by the way. I wish I could have been put in your place, not because I feel bad for you, but because its only fair to the rest of the world... they neded to know who you were... but instead,the world got me...
Fun, I remembered that I had an expanded version of "Long Ago and Far Away". I edited the version you read, and added the revisions to it. The first version lacked something, and I think I added it to this revision. Let me know if you like it better after the revision.
Ha, Fun! This little "ditty" was just written for pure fun! It's about those pesky insects that "bitecha", and then "beetcha" before you can clobber them with a slap! I'm sure you've met some of these pesky critters on bivouac! Thanks for your comment!
Thanks for your kind comment on "Long Ago and Far Away"! It is condensed from a short story that I wrote many years ago. You said that you were a soldier, and I would like you to know that you have my gratitude for your service and the thanks of a grateful nation! Good luck with your writing!
Thanks for the comment on Stupid Pride. Yes, it is about someone. They have screwed up half their life, but try and tell me that I'm doing something wrong in life. But I also have a lot of pride myself. So you can look at it in two ways. Me telling someone else and me telling me. Katana