--Elite Writer Alias: Gene Name: Erin Kalmer ASL: 16/Male/Australia Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: Betrayed Knight [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 1136 Signup Date: 398 D 1.09 Years 0.11 Decades 13.27 Months 56.86 Weeks 3.98000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Chances are I am better than you... Don't push it.
Thats OK. I understand what that's like. I always get kicked off and don't get the chance to tell people so I know what you mean. Take your time. Theres no rush.
I really do like your opinion. You tore me down, and didn't bull [censored] me at all. I like that. What i meant by natural rhythm, is that if you read it plain, there is relatively no similarity in the amount of syllables between rhymes, which of course would make it seem out of rhythm without hearing the music it goes with. Some songs are like that. It's not necessarily a bad thing.
Second off, any time a rhyme is forced (anger isn't really an excuse brotha!) than it's going to make anything sound crappy. Some songs get butchered because of this. Obviously, most people have done it at some point or another. I know i have.
As far as me, i have written roughly a thousand songs, many of which have been published, or used by bands. I have also finished roughly 70 songs, and am in the process of recording them. I do have "natural rhythm".
Obviously, things need to go through changes to get from point a to b successfully. Obviously i liked something about the piece, or i wouldn't have commented on it. I don't post comments to things that i have are unsalvageable, which sadly, is alot of stuff posted on here.
With some work, your "worst piece" could become your best. That's all.
Not to make you think your great or anything, but ...you are... at role-playing and I was wondering if you might be interesting in one of my to-be's?
It would be set in modern time. Um you should check it out. It's going to be called... Vision... I think... if I change it... I will tell you! Anyways...
If you don't like it. Whatever, its okay! You should check it out though!
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