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    --Elite Writer
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    Name: BLACK BURN
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     The pain inside
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    ::The pain inside : Class : Random Thoughts :
     Enternity
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    ::Lostfriend : Class : Personal Quotes :
     OUR Relationship
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    ::Serious : Class : Personal Quotes :
     Thoughts II
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     Slave to a knife
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Raining Blood
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    ::Dark : Class : Rant :
     Emo
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     Elite Reaper
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    ::Dark : Class : Personal Quotes :
     The Pain Inside
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    ::Satire : Class : Deep Thought :
     Pretty Girl
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    ::Longing : Class : Personal Quotes :
     Emotionally Confused
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    ::Passion : Class : Personal Quotes :
     Old Ways
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    ::Depressed : Class : Random Thoughts :
     Suicidal Girl Too
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Letting Go
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    ::Depressed : Class : Personal Quotes :
     Is Love Worth It
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     My Pride
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    ::Satire : Class : Deep Thought :
     myspace
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    ::Them : Class : Prose :
     The Rebounder
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    ::Being a Teen : Class : Random Thoughts :
     U Kiss Me
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     With Out
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    hey how are you? thanks for the comment on "your kiss" =]
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 12:51:53 | by love_confusion - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey!

    I just wanted to thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I actually wrote it a while back when I was going through things with a guy. Thank you for also putting it as one of your favorites.

    I took the time to read through a lot of your stuff and I really enjoyed your work. I'd comment on them all but frankly i don't have too many criticisms. I did realize that some of your poems have the same writing style as the one that i wrote so i guess your comment about how my poem would fit in with your work somewhere makes sense.

    anyways, thanks again for the comment. I'll make the effort to comment on some of yours soon.
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 16:42:25 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the review and advice, i'll defenitely think it over
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 14:26:57 | by forfila - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    np anytime. i did mean what i sad.
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 16:56:20 | by SickOfHurting U - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Nope. I live near Sumner/ Bonney Lake/ Enumclaw. Or Puyallup, if none of those are familiar.
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 11:49:43 | by Jester_Gesture - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    No I didn't. I said your poem was [censored] [censored]. I had to check though as I was [censored]faced at the time. Nothing personal-I was just in a foul mood.
    Cheers
    A.C
    | Posted on 2007-12-17 09:53:53 | by Asakura Cowboy - [ Reply to This ] -



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