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    I hope the RP didn't go too far ahead, can bring you up to date if you wish
    | Posted on 2010-03-11 19:37:55 | by Lord Bane - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i agree all things are merely permitted but beyond that note i believe there are three categories of "stuff" permitted: 'whats', 'hows', and 'whys'.
    for now ill speak of the 'hows'.
    there are six processes permitted,in pairs; truth-deception,circumstance-situation, intention and impression...

    ???
    | Posted on 2010-01-31 16:15:40 | by Cure - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Here's your poem Tony!
    I relly hope you like it!
    >:D


    Oohwoah ohhhh Oh woah. {repeat 2x}

    The same four walls keep screaming at me
    Telling me lies about the world outside
    They preach a world of love and tenderness
    The likes of which i can only dream,
    Yet this world of peace and love
    Has yet to be found

    That is the truth to this world

    No love, only hate
    {Its Permitted}
    No mercy, only fear.
    {Its Permitted}
    No emotions, only emptiness
    Drowning in my tears
    But in the end I must remember that everything,
    and I mean everything,
    is permitted...

    {Guitar solo}

    Believe me baby if it exists,
    Its only a world of make believe
    Its whispers and fairy tales
    nothing like youd believe

    That is the truth to this world
    No love, only hate
    {Its Permitted}
    No mercy, only fear.
    {Its Permitted}
    No emotions, only emptiness
    Drowning in my tears
    But I must remember that everything,
    and I mean everything, is permitted...

    So these walls try to coax me into believing
    Try to help me keep faith in a dying world
    To these walls I say thank you
    For trying to keep me sane
    For having faith in a world so cold
    The truth, though, is nothing

    But That is the truth to this world

    No love, only hate
    {Its Permitted}

    No mercy, only fear.
    {Its Permitted}

    No emotions, only emptiness
    Drowning in my tears
    But I must remember that everything,
    and I mean everything, is permitted... {repeat chorus until fade out}
    | Posted on 2010-01-30 04:46:50 | by Aylar - [ Reply to This ] -
      

    Let rage consume me
    Let it be my guide
    May it lead me to my disaster
    May it empower me
    Intune with my darkness

    Let greed control me
    Let it be unquestioned
    May it feed on my dreams
    May it show no mercy
    Dripping with my disgust

    Let cruelity surround me
    Let it pull at my strings
    May it give me false enjoyment
    May it lock me away
    Securing my mind

    It is a caged beast
    It is a wicked curse
    It is, above all else, another me.


    I really liked this piece, like alot! It makes me think a little bit though, about what exactly is going on with you in life. I mean for you to write something like this about another person lurking within you, something had to be the trigger.


    It is a caged beast
    It is a wicked curse
    It is, above all else, another me.

    This was my favorite three lines. Because i think you ended the short passage well, with it. I mean, my thought on it are your insane..no no i kid Haha ;] But seriously, i think alot of people have two sides to them. One side they show the world, the other that lurks and gets dragged along the sands of time. But eventually both sides show, and it looks like your other side is full of anger, and rage. Hopefully it won't be shown around me.



    Well done =3
    I would of left this comment on the comment section..but theres no box to comment Oo-oo
    SO.
    Its be here..



    Your bro.
    Jace~
    | Posted on 2010-01-28 19:35:36 | by TasteMyRainbow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey awsome job on "another me," it dark but its good. thought i stop by and check it out.


    Faid
    | Posted on 2010-01-28 18:58:23 | by faideddarkness - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    heyyyy


    http://www.eliteskills.com/rp/entry/119227


    if you're interested :D
    | Posted on 2010-01-09 02:38:03 | by aalewyn - [ Reply to This ] -



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