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Journal: A New Poem -------------------------------------------Mood: Guess what!?    Woo hoo! I just wrote a new poem! It sucks, but the important part is that I'm writing again! Oh, how I love writing poems. I did miss it so. Too bad I can only do it when I'm in a melancholy mood. ...Created 2008-06-02 12:14:10     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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Thanks, Jayne I appreciate your feedback and will bear your comments in mind if undertaking revisions. DB

| Posted on 2007-01-18 18:15:15 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for commenting in whispers. i appreciate your interpretation. by the way, i like the name. :)

| Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by eowyn - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the advice! I've modified and straightened the rhthym.

| Posted on 2006-12-19 00:00:00 | by albery rinash - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the help with The House of Tattoos. I appreciate it, it made a huge difference and I did make a change. I also added a few more lines that I had neglected to mention which were a part of the dream. If you get the chance, please let me know if you like the change. Thanks again, Cheryl

| Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by Inducted_Kitty - [ Reply to This ] -

ok good. i am glad ur not a bully. and alteast you have friends:( jk. but yea i try not to pick on them because u dont kno how easy it is to lose friends.

| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by blankscreen - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks so much for the comment, I appreciate you taking the time to check out my poem. I agree, that third line was a little funny to me too, I just changed it a bit, we'll see what happens. P.S. Religion = Rules taught by men, go to biblegateway.com and click on the left link, it says, "Keyword Search", type in "Rules taught by men", and see what Jesus has to say about it... I think you shoudl go after it with that short story series, imagination is a powerful tool. Cheers, Tom

| Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by UnspokenDreamer - [ Reply to This ] -

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