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    Journal: something
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    La dee doo da doo.


    ...Created 2009-02-11 16:25:57     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Fell For A Flirt
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     Wishful Thinking
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     To Be Shunned
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Space Cadet
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Star Soap Opera: Corn maze
    :|| V: 651 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     An Influenced Fall
    :|| V: 547 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Related Ramblings
    :|| V: 682 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Time Time Time
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Don't
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     Box of Colored Dominos
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     Clean Out Your Heart
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     The same as before?
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     Tragedy Of I
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    ::The pain inside : Class : Poetry :
     World #2
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     When on the Downside
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Guitars and Starbucks
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     Fall into it
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    Oops, I forgot to put one more comment in my critique of your poem. FYI: if you were to submit that poem somewhere, italics for speech look much better than quotation marks. OK that's all.

    Thanks for putting it up, I enjoyed reading.
    | Posted on 2009-02-12 16:32:45 | by I_Bleed_Ink - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey. So I read An Influenced Fall and was going to comment but I thought I'd read your journal first. You seem nice, which is why I'm writing my comment about your poem here.

    It's the best I've read on here in a while, but that's not saying much. Check your spelling,please. And the poem seemed like a self-help one- one to help you clear your head. Try rewriting it when the dust has settled from what's happened.

    And the main reason I'm writing on your wall and not on your poem? Cause I can relate, totally relate. But I didn#t want to post a crappy 'I can relate' comment. Cause you'd see you had a comment and be excited then feel let down when you saw what I wrote.

    Anyway- I did like it

    Maddie
    | Posted on 2009-02-09 11:02:54 | by Fifi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    no prob
    | Posted on 2008-07-17 07:58:09 | by discombobulated - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks a lot for the comments on 'I almost love you'

    I've been waiting all day for a comment and then, like buses, two come along at once

    When you first start commenting on other peoples stuff it's daunting at first, isn't it? You want to say what you think, be honest with people and help them but at the same time have to be mindful that not everyone wants help - they just want praise - so you walk a tightrope. I, like you, enjoy it

    So anyways, welcome to eliteskills. Hope you get what you want out of the place and thanks again for reading my poem.
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 17:23:32 | by Predator - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, muchas gracias Heidi...thank you for the comment and thanks for the faves on those ones. Like they say, "Days are made to be made, so make 'em."

    Thanks again.
    | Posted on 2008-04-16 22:16:06 | by hyproglo - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your comment on "Dont touch me!". Yeah I am glad you got the emotion in it :)
    -Miranda
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 02:52:24 | by UnderlinedInRed - [ Reply to This ] -



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