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Oops, I forgot to put one more comment in my critique of your poem. FYI: if you were to submit that poem somewhere, italics for speech look much better than quotation marks. OK that's all.
Hey. So I read An Influenced Fall and was going to comment but I thought I'd read your journal first. You seem nice, which is why I'm writing my comment about your poem here.
It's the best I've read on here in a while, but that's not saying much. Check your spelling,please. And the poem seemed like a self-help one- one to help you clear your head. Try rewriting it when the dust has settled from what's happened.
And the main reason I'm writing on your wall and not on your poem? Cause I can relate, totally relate. But I didn#t want to post a crappy 'I can relate' comment. Cause you'd see you had a comment and be excited then feel let down when you saw what I wrote.
Thanks a lot for the comments on 'I almost love you'
I've been waiting all day for a comment and then, like buses, two come along at once
When you first start commenting on other peoples stuff it's daunting at first, isn't it? You want to say what you think, be honest with people and help them but at the same time have to be mindful that not everyone wants help - they just want praise - so you walk a tightrope. I, like you, enjoy it
So anyways, welcome to eliteskills. Hope you get what you want out of the place and thanks again for reading my poem.
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